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for Persistence

by chayron

person Saiyanprincess
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi there ^^

I LOVE Your work! I love it!! I really do! ^^

:3 !!
person kikyo
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!!!!!!! ^_^ :jumps up and down for joy!: I LOVE IT!! IT'S TOO PRECIOUS! :screams: ^_^ by the way, you did great with your writing. i really enjoyed this story! i hope there's others of yours that are just as good!! ^_^ :extremely happy:
person majinbulgeta
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG THIS STORY WAS ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL!!!! GREAT ENDING! IM SO GLAD IT ALL WORKED OUT! =D
person kit-kit
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice i bet i can guess what that annoucement was that kakarott is pregnant
person Macha
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I am glad things turned out well in the end. I do have to say I am a sucker for happy endings!

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. I hope to see another soon.
person ~anz~ ^_~ !!!
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... so many revelations! ... so much to digest!

The King...he tried for Kakarott too? Kakarott is very fortunate the Prince showed up when he did!

And Damaro?! What a way for the Prince to find out about his child! From his lover's former lover?!

Talk about Persistence they certainly had many obstacles to overcome to get back to each other...


Thank you for sharing this wonderful story of perseverance with us. I really enjoyed it...

You write wonderfully... please continue... I look foward to all of your endeavors...

Bless you... Bless your talent.... and your talented imagination! ~_^!!!

person kikyo
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor vegeta.. sniff sniff! T-T it so sad... i love it! ^-^ i hope you'll update soon, this is one of my favorite stories! i can't wait to read what comes next! you're a great writer. keep it up! maybe you'll write a novel and it'll become a best seller..? who knows! but you're great. PLEASE CONTINUE! i'll cry if you quit... T-T
person kit-kit
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow things just keep getting complex
person Macha
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aaaahhh, this chapter twisted and turned, and threw in some angst, and then, when Vegeta finally figured out that Kakarott wasn't a mind reader, Kakarott still can't make the easy decision, because of his guilt about Damaro.

Vegeta's nervousness about the possibility of Kakarott going to his father had in turn made ME nervous. Crap... what will happen if Kakarott does go?

So MANY questions. *sobs* I am so sorry this is the second to last chapter.

Thank you for the update!
person Webtester01
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta finnaly voiced his feelings...and Kakarot finally understands.

Great chapter.

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