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by chayron

person Macha
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*BIG CHEESY GRIN* I have to LOVE instincts! LOL. If Kakarott had been thinking with his normal consiousness, I am not certain what the out come would have been. Something in him insisted to protect instead of flee. :D

I wonder how he will set this whole mess to rest in his own head.

Now I have to pout until the next update. *Very sad face* Excellent chapter.
person Webtester01
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Looks like Kakarott is seeing again.

I wonder how king will react to thing now.

Keep up the great work.
person kit-kit
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i see kakarott finally relieze that vegeta is good
person chibi_vegeta
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM


well well...*snerks*...practicing your cliffies are you? nice chapter, action, angst, and the plot thickens. good job!


you still have a few little glitches with your english but because they are so few they're easy to skip over and not too distracting. are you getting this beta'd? I can't remember.


person ChibiRinni
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!! I just started combing through this section and I luv ur story!! Please tell me that u'll put up the rest soon. I can't wait to see what happens!

~ChibiRinni ^.~
person kit-kit
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice
person Webtester01
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 9


I like how you described his reaction to the rain. And the sunny weather gives me the impression that events will change for the better... for the moment anyway.


Keep up the great work.


person ~anz~ ^_~
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Way to go prince...make inroads with Kakarott the confused.

Again with Damaro...who is this lout... anther one for the prince to blast away?!

Aww how nice...he's gonna get a pretty flower...

That's right prince...kill em with kindness//// so you can grunt, sweat and get it on!!!
person kikyo
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww!! Kakarott's finally warming up! ^-^ I'm so happy! Do I see a definite success for Prince Vegeta in the near future? I hope so. Still loving your story! Keep up with the great work that you do! ^-^
person Macha
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.... Vegeta sure wants things to go his way without having to force Kakarott into doing something the third-class doesn't want to do.

Castle guards are so good for gossip.

I am glad Verlio's relationship with Kakarott is making Kakarott healthier.


Can't wait to see how this heat thing progresses.

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