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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved the story you should write more congrats you should get a medal lol see ya around
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter.
Kakarott finally got that load off his chest. Veliro may become a mediator.
I wonder if Veliro will talk to the prince.
I look foraward to the next chapter.
Kakarott finally got that load off his chest. Veliro may become a mediator.
I wonder if Veliro will talk to the prince.
I look foraward to the next chapter.
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow im glad vegeta didn't kill valiro.
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... That went better than expected. I am very glad Vegeta tried to think everything out before he acted in that situation.
Now to see what will happen between Verlio and Kakarott and Vegeta and Kakarott.
Excellent chapter!
Now to see what will happen between Verlio and Kakarott and Vegeta and Kakarott.
Excellent chapter!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. just wow. please continue! that\'s all i have to say... it\'s great!!!!!! ^-^
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chap! it\'s the first time I read a 2nd class mentioned. at least as I remember. anyway, it\'s a major gap you\'re filling, since most stories (all the stories I read till now!) deal with just elites (1st???) and 3rd class... I always got the feeling something was missing...
Well, tell us more about it pls! how can you tell a 2nd from a 3rd class?
As for the er... lemon... *blushes*... \'twas great... always loved Kakarot like that...*hides face*
thanks
Well, tell us more about it pls! how can you tell a 2nd from a 3rd class?
As for the er... lemon... *blushes*... \'twas great... always loved Kakarot like that...*hides face*
thanks
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
methinks someone is gonna be pissed...*snerks*
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY, Kakarott to the resque, and Veliro received only a scaring and a broken tail. That was close... I was sad to hear that there hadn\'t been other resques in the past for him.
Vegeta didn\'t like the guards talking bad about Kakarott huh?
Lovely lemon you put in there, even if it was with the OC.
I just hope they don\'t wake up to a very pissed off Vegeta. That would suck.
Vegeta didn\'t like the guards talking bad about Kakarott huh?
Lovely lemon you put in there, even if it was with the OC.
I just hope they don\'t wake up to a very pissed off Vegeta. That would suck.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was different...and cool.
Kakarott has a possible new ally.
Veliro better hope Vegeta doesn\'t find out about what he and Kakorott did.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Kakarott has a possible new ally.
Veliro better hope Vegeta doesn\'t find out about what he and Kakorott did.
I look forward to the next chapter.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
he sure wore that towel for a while...
Veliro had the lube in his pocket? He was very sure of himself, wasn\'t he?
I guess Kakarott had to get \'Veliro\' out of his system...
Wonder what the Prince is gonna do when he finds out?
Blast the cur? One could only hope...
And who is this Damaro, anyway? Another cur that needs blasting?
Seems like the Prince has a lot of competion for Kakarott....
Blast away Prince...blast away the competition.
Veliro had the lube in his pocket? He was very sure of himself, wasn\'t he?
I guess Kakarott had to get \'Veliro\' out of his system...
Wonder what the Prince is gonna do when he finds out?
Blast the cur? One could only hope...
And who is this Damaro, anyway? Another cur that needs blasting?
Seems like the Prince has a lot of competion for Kakarott....
Blast away Prince...blast away the competition.