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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i wonder how vegeta will react when he finds out veliro and kakarott had sex.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! Loved the linguistic exploration of Mirtis... Dialects, regions, culture... wonderful touch!
Just the MPreg thing still freaks me out!!!
hope you update soon!
Just the MPreg thing still freaks me out!!!
hope you update soon!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh.
Looks like more trouble. I hope Veiro gets helped out. I also were what will happen to the others.
I wonder what new approach the Prince will take in dealing with Kakarot. Will Kakarot escape? *waits for next chapter*
Looks like more trouble. I hope Veiro gets helped out. I also were what will happen to the others.
I wonder what new approach the Prince will take in dealing with Kakarot. Will Kakarot escape? *waits for next chapter*
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh.... all that drama and angst and then you threw in a cliff hanger that doesn\'t seem even remotely related. *hisses* Evil!
Okay, ranting is done now. You explored many of Kakarott\'s emotions, thoughts and memories in this chapter. Gave a little more background about what he has been up to, and you put it all down in a very good story form. Nice job.
Waiting for your next update!
Okay, ranting is done now. You explored many of Kakarott\'s emotions, thoughts and memories in this chapter. Gave a little more background about what he has been up to, and you put it all down in a very good story form. Nice job.
Waiting for your next update!
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nnnooo why valiro i don\'t want him to get rape
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice that arguement with the servant was funny
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter.
The wheels keep on turning. :D
*waits for next chapter*
The wheels keep on turning. :D
*waits for next chapter*
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY... Kakarot Lives! That\'s a relief, of course, it wouldn\'t be much of a story without him, now would it?
Vegeta has set him up very nicely in that room. I suspect Kakarot will get bored soon, but at least he has food. hehe Poor servant, I\'d have probably been staring also. *drools* Kakarot in a towel. Yummy.
Thank you for the quick update and the explination of what the heck had happened.
I like this story, and although I don\'t expect updates this fast very often, update soon again please.
Vegeta has set him up very nicely in that room. I suspect Kakarot will get bored soon, but at least he has food. hehe Poor servant, I\'d have probably been staring also. *drools* Kakarot in a towel. Yummy.
Thank you for the quick update and the explination of what the heck had happened.
I like this story, and although I don\'t expect updates this fast very often, update soon again please.
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Part 4
I like how you described the baquet and the past nine years. Everything has changed so much. Wonderful descriptions.
Keep it up!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um... Okay, what the heck just happened?
Oh, and before I forget... YAY an update. WHOOT!
But now you have me intreged, and I hope you update sooner!
Oh, and before I forget... YAY an update. WHOOT!
But now you have me intreged, and I hope you update sooner!