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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t really read anything indepth around this site since 1. I don\'t care for fanfics--I\'m an original fic person myself, and 2. most erotica is written in a way that totally turns me off, or else I just don\'t sympathize with the characters. Still, I used to watch \"DBZ\" religiously and was curious about a Bulma/Vegeta fic and so checked this out from your link at the AFF Group. I admit I kind of browsed the beginning sections to get to the ending part. ^_^; But I enjoyed it. I like how you kept Vegeta in character and didn\'t make him all mushy or romantic like most people would do. Him being pretty inconsiderate to Bulma was a good touch since that seems just like what he would do.
So...there you go, one of my remarkably rare reviews...I don\'t think I\'ve even left one before. o_o
So...there you go, one of my remarkably rare reviews...I don\'t think I\'ve even left one before. o_o
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Some fics tend to have a mind of their own... I like this one and the way it lead you. I am, however sad that Bulma didn\'t have a climax. Kinda leaves an opening for more *wiggles eyebrows*. A good story. Well done. ^_^
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was yummy! I can imagine Vegeta was probably like that with her the first time. Good job!
I\'d like to see more of this if your muse can tempt you to do it! ~nudge, nudge. Whispers toSJ muse~ Make her write more of this. ^_^
I\'d like to see more of this if your muse can tempt you to do it! ~nudge, nudge. Whispers toSJ muse~ Make her write more of this. ^_^