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Nice, looks like ChiChi has a good relationship going on with our sweet torrid prince. Please tell me that you are going to fill us in on how Vegeta and ChiChi got together. I am very curious to read that part...


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Now this is a good story, Hopefully you\'ll continue it. If you have writers block here is a good thing you could try in your next chapters. How bout Goku\'s revived with the Dragonballs but since he lost everything he cared for which he died protecting so many times Goku becomes the ultimate evil super being. Since he is the Strongest Fighter in the Universe, and has nothing else to protect he decides to stop caring and becomes a true saiyan warrior at mind and heart. Let\'s see if Chichi regrets making Goku into the warrior he\'s become.

I LOVE VEGETA AND CHICHI STORIES but in your second chapter you just put them together. are you going to explain how they got together? please i really want to know and what abut goten?

This is awesome.

Nice, I like that you are giving ChiChi another chance to make her own way. I too dislike how she is portrayed in the series (I too did a ChiChi fic ^_^) I wait patiently to see what you do next to hte poor woman....

I love it! Please update soon.