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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Words fail me to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. It has angst, a good plot, and delicious smut (con and non-con) all wrapped in a neat package. I drooled all over the place reading it and it's all thanks to you. This was great fun.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty hardcore. Didnt think it'd be like that when I read the summary. Oh well. If you wanted a real villain, why not Envy? He's pretty easy to hate.
Hmm, maybe too easy.
Yeah, I guess you got it right by using Scar. I'd have dropped this fic mid-chapter if Envy ever got to rape Roy.
Hmm, maybe too easy.
Yeah, I guess you got it right by using Scar. I'd have dropped this fic mid-chapter if Envy ever got to rape Roy.
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story alot!! I saw this story too at the Angst archives. You should add the last chapter too. You know we need more Yaoi stories with scar in them. Anyway Great Job on the Story!! you should write more soon!!! Keep up the good work!!
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was very well done. You explored the lengths people will go to, in order to protect the ones they care about, and your plot line explained facets of Mustang's personality. Roy saved Ed; then it was Ed's turn to save Roy, and both seemed quite in character in doing so.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...im in complete and total awe right now. this was brilliant. more than that, it was fantastic! my complements to you my friend! Awesome job! this was so great, so captivating and romantic! beautiful! sheerly amazing! you, are one talented author! very very good! I couldn\'t keep my eyes off this until i finished it! this was so great! u rule! This story rocks so fuckin hard! nice job dude! bravo, BRAVO!!!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This ended very well. I actually didn\'t expect such a good ending. It was a nice place to leave off, and very well strung together. Good story.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is just sooooo beautiful!
I really really loved it!
I really really loved it!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great job. I like how you concluded this story: uncertain about the future, but knowing perhaps friendship will be part of the mix. 8-)
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story I\'m a bit sad that it\'s over though...I\'ll get over it though ^_^ plz write more stories like this because it always killed me to have to wait for another chapter of your story which means it was very good! Plus you are a terrific author who deserves more reviews then you have now I give you a 10/10 for your interesting and different story.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww...roy and ed are so cute!
i\'m actually sad that chapter four was the last one, but i think you wrapped everything up very nicely. no loose ends! everything about this story had a very real feel to it. you kept both roy and ed very in character (which is a must for me when reading stories containing this pair). i think that is one of the biggest strengths of this story. not only the lack of ooc-ness, but it was so emotionally charged at times i didn\'t know if i wanted to cry, laugh, or shove down the blush i knew had worked itself on my face.
while this story was short on chapters, there was just so much story and information packed into every single one that i didn\'t feel like i was missing something. i just can\'t say enough how much i love this story.
chapter four was one of my absolute favorites. the way roy and ed ended up together, while under any other circumstances might have seemed awkward or moving too fast, with what had already happened between them, it was only natural. and i loooved it that it was ed that made the first move (if you could call it that). i was like, \'whoot! go ed!\'
sorry...couldn\'t help myself. and that sex scene. it was so hot, i almost melted off my seat! from their first awkward moments of self-denial and shame, to the heavy, lust-filled gazes exchanged, it was all so good! too many stories that focus on roy/ed have ed as being some weak uke, and that just doesn\'t suit him at all. it was refreshing to see that, even if roy was the one doing most of the work (this time), ed was still the one to initiate everything. he kissed the colonel. he didn\'t let roy pull away. i personally thought one of the hottest moments was when roy noticed ed\'s nervousness and pulled back and then ed put roy\'s hand on his cock, that was so sexy! i hope i\'m making sense to you, but it was little moments like that throughout the story that make it so great!
oh, and the banter between ed and roy the next morning...so cute and still so impossibly in character for both of them.
well, i\'m still sad about no more chapters, but maybe in the future you will write more for fma. (please?) anyways...best of luck to you in any future writing endeavors.
and yes...a chained roy and ed is ALWAYS hot!!!
i\'m actually sad that chapter four was the last one, but i think you wrapped everything up very nicely. no loose ends! everything about this story had a very real feel to it. you kept both roy and ed very in character (which is a must for me when reading stories containing this pair). i think that is one of the biggest strengths of this story. not only the lack of ooc-ness, but it was so emotionally charged at times i didn\'t know if i wanted to cry, laugh, or shove down the blush i knew had worked itself on my face.
while this story was short on chapters, there was just so much story and information packed into every single one that i didn\'t feel like i was missing something. i just can\'t say enough how much i love this story.
chapter four was one of my absolute favorites. the way roy and ed ended up together, while under any other circumstances might have seemed awkward or moving too fast, with what had already happened between them, it was only natural. and i loooved it that it was ed that made the first move (if you could call it that). i was like, \'whoot! go ed!\'
sorry...couldn\'t help myself. and that sex scene. it was so hot, i almost melted off my seat! from their first awkward moments of self-denial and shame, to the heavy, lust-filled gazes exchanged, it was all so good! too many stories that focus on roy/ed have ed as being some weak uke, and that just doesn\'t suit him at all. it was refreshing to see that, even if roy was the one doing most of the work (this time), ed was still the one to initiate everything. he kissed the colonel. he didn\'t let roy pull away. i personally thought one of the hottest moments was when roy noticed ed\'s nervousness and pulled back and then ed put roy\'s hand on his cock, that was so sexy! i hope i\'m making sense to you, but it was little moments like that throughout the story that make it so great!
oh, and the banter between ed and roy the next morning...so cute and still so impossibly in character for both of them.
well, i\'m still sad about no more chapters, but maybe in the future you will write more for fma. (please?) anyways...best of luck to you in any future writing endeavors.
and yes...a chained roy and ed is ALWAYS hot!!!