rate_review Reviews

This truly was a great story. i laughed....i cried.......but i mostly cried. i would never have thought something like that to happen in al of fanfictions. you are a good writer! that was a great story, i mean you definatley kicked J.K.Rowlings ass by a long shot in my book! i give you much luck for your future writings.

My respect for you, really, you are good!, This story was so good writed and structured, I just like it very much, congratulations!

This was fantastic, very far from the norm. I hope we get a sequal, so we can see their blossoming relationship, it doesn\'t have to be long. I am very impressed with the way you kept them in character, I believe they would react this way to these situations. Follow-up please even if it is just one chap about their future, they must be together it is only fair.

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYY!! YOU UPDATED!! But, I am disappointed in you... =_=


JUSTKIDDING!!!


WHY WAS THERE NO SCREAMING PAINFUL AGONIZING DEATH FOR FUCKTARD SCAR?! I mean, being impaled by a huge piece of rock is painful, but not humiliatingly painful!! Ed should have somehow bound scar to the floor, and then bashed his head in with his automail arm!! MUAHAHAHA!! And Roy should have burned off little pieces of the bastard while he screamed for mercy!!

Or not...o.O

Maybe I\'m just a bit too much of a sadist!!^_^ More torture would have ruined the fluff. And what fluff it was!! If I do say so myself, that was a tasty angsty lemon full of...ANGST!! YAY!! Good times for the boys! And I truly adore the after sex talk, that was original and sweet!^_^ It made them seem so real!! ROY\'S A PERVE!!! BLOODY PEDO-COLONEL!! But that\'s okay, cuz it\'s stautory yaoi! No more rape for them!! I hope! I\'m so glad they wound up happy!! But Scar still should have gotten his intestines eaten by angry monkies...DAMN SCAR! *fist shake*

Overall, I give you a Y+, for ultimate yaoiful happiness! WOOT!

yay happy ending! Great job! I t was so lovely! I loved it from start to finish! It was great loved it ^^

*rejoices* You finally updated it! ^^

I was having a panic attack because I couldn\'t find it anymore. And all of a sudden, there it is! w00t!
Awesome. I really think you kept them in-character, and it\'s so sweet too. Kudos to ya!

Wow......You\'ve just made my year. I\'ve found a new favorite genre. That was absoultely incredible. Bravo. This is definately my favorite fanfic. I really think you should keep writing, you\'re a very talented author. I can\'t wait for chapter 4! Oh, and, if you didn\'t notice, you made a strange typo in chapter 3: \"His pants returned to normal\". If you don\'t have an editor, I\'d be glad to volounteer. If you do, no offense meant.

...I should not be enjoying this fic so much 0_o But you know, I am dying to find out what happens! Please please give us some kind of conclusion soon. (And nice to see that at least one of them is keeping his head. I always pegged Roy as the type to break down, and Ed as the type to keep going.)

Oh my gosh... That was awsome! You are such a good writer! This is one of my favorite fanfics ever! I can\'t wait till the next chapter.

*Hugs Edo-chan* I like this chapter, I like to see Ed in pain (Ed:HEY!) I like him so I like to see him in pain, extrange? notfor me *roll eyes* continue