rate_review Reviews

OH DAMN I LOVE IT! too bad ed didn\'t enjoy the rape that much. hehe. update soon!

I liked it. Very nicely written.
Poor Edward and Roy T.T
I cant wait for the next chapter!

Continue this, this is very good and i enjoyed it. Please continue,

I\'ll be checking back later on

Pain, Death, Torture

this story is just incredible. i had almost given up on finding any decent (ahem...i stress the word \"decent\") fics with roy/ed, but i was blown away when i first started reading your story. it\'s brutal at times, but not unnecessarily so. the violence is there to push the plot forward. i\'ve read so many stories where the violence is just...ugh...pointless. and roy having to rape ed...that was horrible. but i like the fact that this story doesn\'t just have them jump into bed. they\'re actually building a relationship (under very extreme circumstances). the colonel might be able to see after this that ed isn\'t just some hot-headed, short, little boy. and ed is already starting to see that there is actually a living, breathing, human being trapped inside roy. it\'s just so...(sigh)...i can\'t think of a word that really describes what i want to say. but it\'s really touching, i guess. i eagerly await the next chapter. i really want to know if they\'ll be escaping soon and what will happen to scar. (btw...yeah, scar is ooc, but that\'s why this is a work of fiction. you can make him however you want to!)

anyways...i\'ll be expecting great things from this story. until next chapter...

I am both awed and saddened...I think that pop I heard when Roy started crying the first time was my heart imploding. It\'s terrifyingly sad and GYAH!! ZOMG!! It\'s such strange circumstances and just so sad!! I really can\'t explain how I feel right now, but you\'d better update soon, or I\'ll send deadly ninja gerbils to your bed via psychic waves!! Did I mention they\'re rabid? ^_^

Oh my god! Thats so sad! *huggles her Roy and Edward!* I loved it..please update soon

Awesome story update soon please!

Awww, poor Mustang... -_-; Uh, poor Ed, too. But geez. Mustang... *huggles a Mustang plushie*

I want more! More, more more, durnit! ^^ Yaoi!!! *cough* Err, yeah.

It really IS good, though. And, BTW, some people do read the A/Ns. Namely, me.

~smile~ Thanks for the update!

this story so far is very well written. I really hope you update soon. I cant wait to see how both Ed and Roy repay Scar for all hes done.

Keep up the good work...