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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it a little too short...and update!!!!!!!!!!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do you aver update your storys?
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the wan being watcht must be ray because in the azian tornement there were the white tigers trying to to take ray in there team and that explains the part in the story that the wan being watcht had more atantion in azia
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the being watched is Max but i don\'t know whos watching
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this one
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know whose being watched it\'s Max and I know who this \"Him\" is it\'s Kai so the watcher has to be either Tala or Bryan and I think that Bryan was too erm, how can I put this....................Hung up on Ray to go after Max so I\'m gonna say Tala, Spencer seems to well controled and Ian seems more chatty then to just say so little. So Tala, well tell me if I\'m wrong and update soon or the wait will kill me..................Lol, great job. Bye.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what?! that\'s it?? NOooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! MORE! I Demand more! Can it be Bryan/Rei? Please? That pairing so doesn\'t get enough love. pleasepleaseplea--
Rei: *smacks* stop harrassing people to write your fave pairing.
Butterfly: but it doesn\'t get enough LOVE! You know you want more fics with Bryan...
Rei: yes...but it doesn\'t mean you can beg and harras people into it.
*coughs* very good start nonetheless. butbutbut....*chibi eyes* Bryan watching Rei? pwease?
Rei: *smacks* stop harrassing people to write your fave pairing.
Butterfly: but it doesn\'t get enough LOVE! You know you want more fics with Bryan...
Rei: yes...but it doesn\'t mean you can beg and harras people into it.
*coughs* very good start nonetheless. butbutbut....*chibi eyes* Bryan watching Rei? pwease?
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cliff hanger. its appealin an good . but who is watching them i dont now
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooookaayyy..... That was kinda... weird.
Can I guess the pairing? I think it might be a Tala/Max, though I haven\'t seen the last half of Beyblade season one, cos they cut it there. Ray versus Eddy was the last episode we saw.
The chapter was too short, that\'s all. Hope you do the next longer. I look forward to seeing the next chapter, so update!
Can I guess the pairing? I think it might be a Tala/Max, though I haven\'t seen the last half of Beyblade season one, cos they cut it there. Ray versus Eddy was the last episode we saw.
The chapter was too short, that\'s all. Hope you do the next longer. I look forward to seeing the next chapter, so update!
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I re-readed it. And I take my words back, it is not a Tala/Max. *pouts* Would have been nice.