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for Lonely Desire

by Petya

person furin-a
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wait...Kira will make they think the baby isn't his, right? Doesn't the baby have something likes his / her parents (You know...eyes-color or hair-color). If something of him is likes Athrun, maybe Athrun will expect about the fact
person mikyu
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy that Lacus is there to support kira. But it's hard for her since she want to help both, Athrun and Kira. How can she do that if she can't even say to athrun that kira is alright. She's not a person who can lie the whole time.
you want to let them lonely for ... 6/5 month??? until kira's going to give birth? how cruel >.< ... but kira want it so, however what will Athrun do? He might go crazy if he can't find Kira after that missunderstanding. and kira can't hide his secret from Lacus, its a matter of time ... so he can't just show up with a child. I'm looing forward to your next chapter ^^ good luck for your exams, I will also have more time for new pics after my exams

yeah, I like destiny's design too, but that's almost the only thing I like.
I have hope for the GSD Special Edition, I heard it will show the whole story in a better way. But I have to watch the first Special first. (... I'm too afraid to watch it since I don't want to be disappointed again)
person Apchi
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww~~~~ Kira is so fragile! T__T *pets Kira* well, it's a good thing Lacus is there though, she has that comforting aura around her. even though she can be kinda annoying sometimes XD (in the series XD)
poor Asu-chan~~~ a boy just teased him XDDD hahahaha~~~
I love it~ keep it up! ^__^ can't wait for another chapter~~~~ ^___________^
person M
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. great. another update:). But still Lacus doesn't know anything about Kira:((. Poor Kira and Athrun. It doesn't seem they will get together anytime soon. Hope to see Kira as a Mom (or Dad:D) soon:D. Please update soon.
person mikyu
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally! finally!!! lately there weren\'t good fanfic\'s around. You saved my day! Now I have some new inspiration for a new pic ^^.. but Athrun and Kira are so alone now >.<

Destiny is really a sad sequel of Seed ... well, hope the movie will be better :D
person Kaworu
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, at last you\'re back! We (me, pilot_02, and Black) were worried sick... //_^\"

So... First of all, some fanart (that was drawn quite a while ago... //_^)
http://static.diary.ru/userdir/4/9/5/9/49592/7107541.jpg (Kira gives Aslan flowers XD) (a bit crappy)
http://static.diary.ru/userdir/4/9/5/9/49592/7107675.jpg (Well, it\'s not AsuKira... by far //_^\")
http://static.diary.ru/userdir/4/9/5/9/49592/7107803.jpg Ishida-sama\'s and Hoshi\'s characters: Aslan, Mikael (Tenshi no Narumon), Hakkai (Saiyuki), Yuda (Saint Beast), Kaworu (Evangelion), Xelloss (Slayers Next, Try); Kira, Sugino (Tactics), Goku (Saiyuki) (this one is REAL crap //_^\"\"\"\"\")

Now... on with the show )))

...especially a battle-hardened veteran Coordinator, would faint _form_ it...

...Yet the rhythmic sound that assured him that his baby, his tiny in size, yet enormous in significance, personal reason to live and be happy was fine...

Yeah, yeah... What was it? \"It\'s a small step for a man, but an enormous step for mankind\"... Sorry, I just can\'t help the associations. This phrase makes the scene comical.

...\'it\'s nice to know that at least one man can find out what women go through with a pregnancy\'...

Yesss! XD

...I\'d be happy to have some company and take care _for_ another expecting mother...

...She nodded \"I\'ll see what I can do._\"_ But now let\'s get moving_....

...She turned the car in accordance with the instruction of the car computer...

Erm... Did you mean GPS?

...I hope that the medical references are not too boring or far too many...

Well, it\'s OK for me, but Black will bugger me for weeks. Again //_^\" (And I\'m not even a medical student unlike some Hakueis and Zoisites //_^)

Now, I can\'t wait for another chapter //___^ Did you have to continue when I have to defend a diploma project in a month or so? //_^

I can\'t wait to see Lacus\' reaction... *grin*

I like your Kira really much. Even in such circumstances he doesn\'t go into hysteric but stays rather logical and relatively calm. I would personally throw a tantrum and crash every breakable thing available *//_^*

BTW... I was wondering for a while now if you knew Russian... It could be just my imagination though... Anyway, if you do, you can visit me here (if you\'re interested, that is):
http://www.diary.ru/~yaoicoalition/
and if you don\'t, I have an LJ:
http://kaworu-renritsu.livejournal.com

Oh! Is an e-mail mentioned in your profile valid?
person Apchi
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uuuwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa sugoooooooooi~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I realllllllllllllllllllllly love this story! >////////< you\'re such a good writer!! *glomps you* ASUKIRANESSSSS~~~~~ *cough*
sorry, the heat kinda do \"stuff\" to my mind XDDDD (just failed a final exam in math because of it, and this story just made me forget it ^^ thank you~~~)
anywwwwwwwwwway!~
I JUST LOVE THIS FIC!~ it\'s so well written and described! ><
good luck with your exams!! ^^;;
keep up the good job with the chapters~~~ can\'t wait for the next chapter~~~ ^^
person Tyson
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME! Great story! man poor Kira, but plez update soon!
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's killing me! I can't wait untill Athrun finds out and him and Kira are together! PLease update soon! the suspense is kiling me! argh! Keep up the goog work!
person Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! It is one of my favorite AsuKira fics! The plot is good and I love your writing style! Please update soon!

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