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for Lonely Desire

by Petya

person mikyu
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg .. you did it! my heart was breaking when Athrun confessed to "cagalli". What have you done to Kira!!!!! this is too cruel!! to kira ... to athrun ...and to me!!!! I always thought it was a joke when you said you're going to make the baby a child of "Ai". My heart won't stand that! My dreams are already filled with melodramas and it will increas with this capter! You only can stop it to suffer with a very soon update XD !!!!
Kira has no boobs? ... thanks goddness. Now ... I have to think about a picture with a pregnant person without boobs ... >.< why is everything so ridiculous??? maybe because it is. But it's sooo sweet! I'll try me best to make a good pregnant kira. But know ... will he make a happy face? or is it the sad monotone face he was carrying in GSD? (hey, he almost never shows emotion in the serie. He doesn't cry anymore, he isn't afraid anymore, he isn't confused anymore ... and still .. he has no fasion sense!)
person Yami Jay
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this chapter is really good. I love it ^___^ Also, 10 days for Kira to think how to tell Athrun about this? Way too long (even if it's IC)!
person mikyu
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for you answer!!! ^-^ no problem with your delay, I just started to dream about your fanfic XD
Kira's pregnancy fits perfect in my sisters pregnancy, so I've a lot of inspiration. The problem is ... I thought (>.< how can I explain that in english) eerhm ... if a woman gets pregnant, an enzyme stimulate the growth of the boobs. soooo does kira's ... you know ... >..< there must be a good perspektive where kira doesn't look like a girl ... I mean he's still a male although he's pregnant.)
ah, know cagalli knows ... her reaction is kind of realistic and I feel really sorry for her T.T (I've nothing agains asucaga ... and it's sad that there are rumors which say they have official broke up.
person mikyu
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wtf, does the reviews have a limit??? anyway ... I somehow have problems to draw males with boobs ... (lol, I've no problems to draw a pregnant male but I've problems to draw a pregnant male with boobs? ... >.< there must be a good perspektive where kira doesn't look like a girl ... I mean he's still a male although he's pregnant.)
ah, know cagalli knows ... her reaction is kind of realistic and I feel really sorry for her T.T (I've nothing agains asucaga ... and it's sad that there are rumors which say they have official broke up.
person M
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great chapter. I was following your story since now and it is interesting.
Kira is dealing great with pregnancy reading books and thinking about the baby.
Is Kira going to tell Athrun about the pregnancy next chapter?
please make him tell. can't wait to see Athrun's reaction.
person Yumi
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didnt want to comment on your fanfic til is was done because it was so addicting! But I love it. It so good and well put together. It\'s still a little weird that Kira ended up pregnant but it is a total twist on the story...And physics xP!
person no name yet
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh I can see pregneant belly Kira Ooh maternity shopping, oh fun. Sorry I just had twix I\'m a little hyper, anyway this is good and detailed, I can\'t wait to read the rest.
person Kimi
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waii!! That was such a cool chapter!!
--> I actually understand the male pregnancy thingie now! ^^ Aww it\'s soo cute how Kira is taking the news

Can\'t wait to see what\'ll happen next.. wonder what Asuran\'s reaction will be ne? xD
person mikyu
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you! you know .... this is my very first review. The reson why I usually don\'t write reviews is simple ... english is not my first language and my grammar isn\'t that good either. But this fanfic ... YOUR fanfic ... you really did it! Your fanfic ist awesome and every time I\'m looking forward to reading the next chapter. I\'m also impressed how you manage to write this fanfic beside your studies! I mean ... I would be too lazy (oh well ... I AM lazy).
But this fanfic inspire me ... since I\'m reading your fanfic I start to think how would the children of that and that paaring would look like ... I even drew some sketches and now ... I think to draw a pregnant Kira >.< ... I should concentrate on my studies instead of thinking about pregnant \"cute\" boys <.< ....
So ... please make Athrun and Kira and their baby happy! My heart would break if they can\'t be together at the end!

PS. I always like shinn if he\'s not like in destiny ^^
person Yami Jay
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Long explaination and very intructive indeed. I sincerly hoped Kira would have least told someone... Anyway, wanna read the rest.

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