rate_review Reviews

So beautiful! This chapter is so beautiful! I love it!!!

i\'m really sorry, but i don\'t think i can continue reading this. the plot has just gotten too frazzled. the content of your chapters doesn\'t flow right, at least to my mind. something about the way Yzak is trying to get kira and athrun together is weird, like how he\'s doing something so dangerous just to get them together....its not quite right. if you were to write a different story all together, a dearka/yzak one perhaphs, i could read it, but this one has lost my interest. sorry. it ws a good read until here. keep up your work! ^_^

well i\'ve read a lot of ASUKIRA fanfic around the internet (yet still very little fic on them and are all mostly oneshot =.=||)....well i must compliment that this story is written in a very nice way ( not much of long series abt them), different from other authors.... its an excellent piece work!! Keep it up my fren!!! update soon for us XD

i was hopping someone will touch on male preg in GS/ GSD series... i\'ve read alot frm other anime (seriuosly a lot of mpreg) such as Gundam Wing, Weiss Kreuz, FF7...etc... i was wondering will there be anyone willing to writing it in GS/GSD timeline :lolx:

And since this ASUKIRA fic which is my fav. pairing in the GS/GSD universe.... i am 200%-500% agreed on go go MPREG especially to my dear sweet kira :lolx: make him goes all the pain & torture he have to suffer during pregnancy, child birth and aftetmath.... WOW!!!!, i cant wait!!! >< thinking about makes me crazy :lolx: i\'ve been waiting for this long for someone to touch on MPREG in this universe. mwahahahahaah!!!!!

opps to long of crapping here... first time review a fanfic in a long long time =.=...i seldom review fanfic but i do read a lot of them especially ASUKIRA fic.... Keep it up!!! Update soon!!!

ps: feel free to asked me opinions about Mpregs if u like to.... i\'m no expert in it but i LOVE to read MPREGS FIC!!!! mwahahahaha!!!!!

Update soon. I\'m anxious to hear about Kira\'s pregnancy. Question: If they DO have sex, why will they \'drift apart\' or whatever. To consumate they must have mad e some sort of confesion. I\'m confused.

Yay! Another perfect chapter for the perfect story with the perfect plot! =P
I feel so bad for Asuran... ;0; no one should suppose to handle all of that load. But at least he\'s doing it for Kira! ^^

Whee!! Update soon and keep it up perfect fanfic writter!! YAY for chapter EIGHT!

Wow~! Talk about hooking me in! Great chapter...really suspenseful. XD I hope they get together soon! Please update soon! ^^

I feel very bad for Arthrun. Really, I just hope that Kira sees what he has done soon.

Hehe it was cool!! I liked it! ^^ Keep writting and update soon kk? =P

about the male pregnancy thingie (again) --> Well, if you are going to include it, as long as it\'s Asuran and Kira\'s baby, then I guess it wouldn\'t be so bad.. even though I don\'t really like it much xD

I will say that the male pregnancy is a good idea and a very original touch. I want to see this sotry updated.

wait your going to make kira pregenant.........thats seems interesting