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YES! PREGNANT KIRA!! I so support the idea of male preg, why should women do all the hard work when it comes to children? I think that Kira should get pregnant with twins (hehe, like him and cagalli are)! Can athrun handle having twins running around the house? Id love to see him try *insert evil grin here*

^^ I know.. it\'s just... Never mind =P I like it super much! It\'s awesomee!! ^^ Keep writting k? I want to see chapter 11! YAY

male pregnancy? umm.. it\'s okay.. but I don\'t really like it that *much* ^^;;

i love your story!! thanks for writing such a nice fic!!^^
as for your \'survey\'...
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! no mpreg!!!! if you want a pregnancy, kira might as well be a woman...
well, that\'s my opinion, thanks for asking anyway
update soon^^

okay, no offense, but the quality of this story is going waa~ay downhill. i mean, i totally laughed out loud and thought it was funny when you wanted to turn this into an Mpreg, cuz that\'d be cool, but it\'s waaaaay off the story line, at least from what i can gather....i mean, if you turn it into an Mpreg, what\'s gonna happen to Ai, and who exactly is supposed to knock kira up? athrun? that\'d defeat the plot, cuz the whole point is for athrun and kira to get together, right? or was this all planned from the beginning? if it was, then you didn\'t prepare us readers with the proper build up. i DID like the dearka/yzak chapter a lot, you wrote them VERY well, and should write more, but as for the rest of the story\'s strength...we\'ll see what you do.

show me the magic!

good fic so far. yo anwer your question on the pregnacy possible plot. I vote against it, its not that i don\'t like babies i just find pregnacy plots annoying and i try to avoid them. What you have right now is really good,my opinion, no pregnant people. no offence.

Yueh Kitsune

Nice chappy, and as for the survey thing...

I think male pregnancies are okay as long as they are explained well and your not having Kira just have a baby popping out of no where no seemingly no reason whatsoever. But if it has a bit of plot to it, then it will be awesome. Surprise me for the miscarriage or healthy baby thing. ^_~

I love the story. You doing very well. Keep up the good writing. As far as Kira getting pregnant(sp?)/male pregnancy(sp?) I am NOT a fan. While I don\'t like it, I don\'t bash it. Everyone is intitled to their opinion. It just isn\'t my thing. So please, don\'t do it. To me, It will ruin the story.

Once again, keep up the good work!

WOW! this was a great chapter! seriously, that was the best dearka/yzak lemon i\'ve ever read. i really liked the way you made them treat each other: they loved each other and acted fluffy without being too ooc. most people write them as brutish and scary, even in the \"act\". i can\'t stand those lemons. i agree that yzak still needs to be prissy and bitchy like a girl on PMS, but he should also melt whenever he\'s aroung Dearka. yay!

keep up the great work!

OMG! Great job. Please update soon! ^^

Uwaa~
Kawaii little chapter!! -bad bad Ai! xD it\'s really sad though.. how Kira is lying to hide his feelings, and Asuran getting hurt emotionally.. =(-

Oh well, I lovee it! ^^ Keep it up! (write, write writee!! xD)

Can\'t wait until the next chapter!! YAY