rate_review Reviews

that was amazing! i loved it. well done

Oh, my god, that was amazing. One of the best pieces of writing I\'ve ever read. The beginning caught my interest immediately. It made me want to know what Hoenheim wanted with Roy.
The plot was great, really kept my attention. The writing was full of detail and the voice of it was exceptional. Greed\'s sadism mixed with Roy\'s evolving fear is a difference I\'ve never seen in a FMA fanfiction. Ed\'s bravery and optimism was encouraging and gave me hope. It felt like I was actually in the story, like I was seeing it right before my eyes. It was amazing.

Oh, my god, that was amazing. One of the best pieces of writing I\'ve ever read. The beginning caught my interest immediately. It made me want to know what Hoenheim wanted with Roy.
The plot was great, really kept my attention. The writing was full of detail and the voice of it was exceptional. Greed\'s sadism mixed with Roy\'s evolving fear is a difference I\'ve never seen in a FMA fanfiction. Ed\'s bravery and optimism was encouraging and gave me hope. It felt like I was actually in the story, like I was seeing it right before my eyes. It was amazing.

this was great. I particularly enjoyed Ed and I think you captured him very well. Awesome job!

That was a great fic! Is this the end of it, or is there more?? If not, I can\'t wait! :-) EM

Wow, this is very impressive! I loved it completely from beginning to end. I love the way you wrote Roy. You gave him so much depth and insight. The emotions were to well written they practically popped out of the page. I\'m impressed, I know this review is crap, but I just wanted to let you know that this is brilliant and I very much enjoyed it.

Just brilliant!

Bravo!

I LOVED this story. It is going on my list of favs for sure ;] Nothing better than a helpless Roy.

As for your other reviewer, I think they were a tad confused. This is adultfanfiction...meaning the authors here don\'t have to sugar coat everything. Did they expect him to scream \"oh sugar, i sure don\'t wanna touch your no no area\"? Please. (that rant was to the reviewer..)

Don\'t change anything. \"Vulgar\" terms and all made it fantastic. I just wish there was more.

Great story, Imaginative and beautiful. The only thing I did\'nt like was user of the vulgar terms. Something more proper would have fitted the momments more, The mood you were trying to set was ruined by the usage of them. Other than that, The story was a great. A beginning, A middle and an End. And it was entirely sexy! =3

that was great! good work. hope you write more stuff soon!