rate_review Reviews

that was ridiculously awesome!!!!!!!!!

Wow, your fic was fantastic. I laughed all the way through. You hit all the cliches perfectly. I loved the bit where Vegeta started crying. Oh, and the part where he starts talking about measuring systems. It's so typical of (bad) b/v get-togethers that the *alien* speaks perfect English...er...Japanese, idioms and all. Basically, everything you wrote brought back all my years reading (bad) b/v fics... I'm so glad someone else noticed how repetitive and pointless they all are. The one cliche you omitted was that Bulma Is Heartbroken Because Yamacha Is A Bastard Who Nails Anything Female With A Heartbeat, but given the twist at the end of the fic that obviously wasn't possible.

Awww. I couldn\'t stop laughing through it, then I was like, aww, that had to be the sweetest ending. Totally OOC, but I don\'t care cause I was warned. It was so adorable.

on a happier day i would praise this story for thinking outside of that stupid box,
marvelling at your clever (altough) storyline,
and laughing maniacly.

BUT TODAY IS NOT THE DAY!

i am not amused. can we say poorly written?

#jokes!# mop up your grammer thous.

If peeps dont like my comments dont hate. this is the disgruntled way.

ya know for a minute there I thought it was really corny...then I read the end Good Show.