rate_review Reviews

*Whistles* Wow! That was amazing!!!!!!!! You\'re off to such a great start! I love your writing. And yes, pneumonia sucks! My friend had it...*shakes head* it wasn\'t fun. Well, I hope that you\'re feeling better, and if you\'re not, that you get better soon! I\'ll be looking for an update, see ya!

Great, you updated! ^_^ This was good chapter. Bad Kai... But yay you put Brooklyn in it! ^_^ Hope you continue this line, only it can be just better! And don\'t take any stress from this, or else you\'ll fing yourself with a writer block... You\'re doing great! ^_^

Hi! Wow! You fic is amazing! I love it, and for not having a beta, you are doing pretty good with spelling/grammar and such. Great job! I have also read quite a few of your other fic\'s, my favourite was probably Black Winged(next to this one of course). I don\'t think that I reviewed it though... so sorry if I didn\'t! Please hurry and update soon, I will be looking forward to it! See ya!

Oh what a swine. That Kai is such an ass. He\'d better get his act together and apologise. Hope Ray is alright. I saw a review from Studio though. If you want a beta, I\'ll always help if you want. I don\'t think you really need one though. You\'re a great writer. Your other stories are proof of that. And this one. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.

Hey great story :D
Very interesting, it\'s sad that Rei was raped but other then that it was good :D
Hopefully you update soon
hehe I just love Brooklyn he\'s so cute:D

*shudder* that last passage was written in a stunningly beautiful way... the type of way that makes it seem real enough to send a shiver down my spine, a good shiver though. I really hate when Kai is grumpy, *sigh*... I get the whole \'curse\' thing being his motive or whatever, but is he going to become nicer at all later in the fic? *tummy flutter* << Brooklyn tends to have that affect on me... hehe, so he\'s a gypsy too huh? Brooklyn is my fav character to write about, he\'s that sort of character that can only be described by my more favourite words... lol, yeah, I have favourite words to use.. hehe.. So, did Rei and Rai ever do anything? Or is it just Rai and his unrequited love?

keep up the brilliant work!

~studio

chi no hana speaking! this is hot! mean, but hot! if there is this in every chapter, then i doubt i\'ll miss any!!! i love this!!!

Oh...dear. That was rather... awful of Kai ;_;!!!

Way to destroy someone in five minutes, Kai!

I like Brooklyns portrayal XD;

This story has amazing potential, I hope that you see fit to continue it, I look forward to seeing it unfurl. Beyound a few speling errors, the story flows nicely, and it certainly has caught my attention. I hope to read more soon. Ja ne.

NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! You can\'t leave that there, you just... CAN\'T!!!!!! *sighes and calms down*
Okay maybe you noticed: I fell in love with this fic when I first laid my eyes on it (and of course read it). So pleeeeeaaaaase, update really soon!!