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Hey,

Kenny you evil little creep! Poor Max how dare Kai do that I outta beat the shit out of all three of them, little assholes. What about Takao was he in on it too? Poor Max, I hope someday Bryan beats them up for him. -clenches fists- I really hope they get what's coming to them, I'm just so mad. >.< Anyway update when you can, I'll be waiting.

oooooooo i really like this rewritten version, but yey maxie for hitting kai, that guy is seriuosly evil!
and poor max's mum, thats gotta hurt! *sigh* i think they're having lots of problems in that household now...
update soon plz
Liah xx

I've spotted your fic both here and at FF.net and I'd jsut like to tell you how annoying it is that you've put "no mpreg, i hate mpreg" into the summary of both. I don't really care if you like mpreg or not, I do, and when i type it into a search, your fic always comes up. Unless you're specifically trying to get the mrpeg fans to read your story by doing this (in which case, fine, I have no problem with devious self-promotion) theres really no reason for you to bother putting that in the summary. Please consider changing your summaries, and I will consider reading your fic. Thank you for your time.

Ack! ^-^ Awesome, can\'t wait to see what happens (is a reader of the first fic.)

ooo i like the re-written version just as much so far! update soon!
Liah xx

waaaw..really good! *_*
better!!! XD Love it! Can\'t wait for more chaps soon *_* Bryanmax (L).(L)

I don\'t know why you\'ve rewritten it. It was real good as it was. Good chapter though. Hope to see more soon.