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for Between Love and Redemption

by Crya2Evans

person DarkClaw
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Let's out a breath* Oh my God, that was good
person vincents-loverffall
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I CANT BELIEVE YOU STOPPPED IT THERE! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!? WHAT HAPPENS!? Im crying...this is so sad...poor Mustang...you make it sound so believeable...update soon please!
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person wild seven
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story.... I could really feel Ed's anxiety and heartache, and I feel you emphasized nicely. However, his sinful hand (arm) is the automail one, not the flesh one. Still, a very nicely written story. :) (:
person LadyGray
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dark and painful, well done.
person Dark Princess
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is some hardcore angst. OMG! I love the way that you left the ending open too. You really have a clear talent for writing. I feel sorry for both characters. I secretly hope that Roy can use his chalk before Ed can use his piece of sharp steel. Please continue with your writing. I look forwards to reading more of your stuff.
person sil3nt_r3tribution ..not logged in
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is sooooo good!
person Angelic Amaya
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, *sobs* please update so *sobs*!!!

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