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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was just horrible o_o
I write better english than you,and my mother tongue is finnish.
I write better english than you,and my mother tongue is finnish.
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DECENT
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A PERFECT EXAMPLE OF A PIECE OF SHIT THAT NEEDS TO BE FLUSHED
WELL IN WRITING DELETED
WELL IN WRITING DELETED
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the longest run-on sentence I have ever seen. There is so much shit in your story I could make fun of, but I won\'t \'cause I rather not make fun of a seven year old. But I\'m surprised that you know how to spell \"fuck\" but you don\'t know how to spell \"damn\".
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now surely you can make fun of us AND do it properly; providing that\'s what you meant to do.
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the hell was that?? I hope this story does get deleted. You know, its because of stories like these that make it hard to find good fiction anymore on the net. Too much garbage clogging up the fiction world!!! x_x *puke*
Whats worse is that there are only a FEW of us honest enough to give a real review, when others just leave reviews that encourage bad writting to continue. UGH!
Whats worse is that there are only a FEW of us honest enough to give a real review, when others just leave reviews that encourage bad writting to continue. UGH!
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"goten new what he ment and shook his head yes\" <- you said this.
\"Goten knew what he meant and nodded his head in a yes\" <- What you SHOULD have put.Ugh. And there\'s my email if you wish to retaliate; believe me, I\'ll win..
~~thechichislaughterhouse@hotmail.com
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my sentiments exactly...except for this: go back to grade school and learn some grammar....
\"Goten knew what he meant and nodded his head in a yes\" <- What you SHOULD have put.Ugh. And there\'s my email if you wish to retaliate; believe me, I\'ll win..
~~thechichislaughterhouse@hotmail.com
.........
my sentiments exactly...except for this: go back to grade school and learn some grammar....
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
go back to gradeschool and learn some grammar!
\"goten new what he ment and shook his head yes\" <- you said this.
\"Goten knew what he meant and nodded his head in a yes\" <- What you SHOULD have put.Ugh. And there\'s my email if you wish to retaliate; believe me, I\'ll win.
\"goten new what he ment and shook his head yes\" <- you said this.
\"Goten knew what he meant and nodded his head in a yes\" <- What you SHOULD have put.Ugh. And there\'s my email if you wish to retaliate; believe me, I\'ll win.
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a complete pile of CRAP !!! HORRIBLE content/grammar/punctuation/spelling, etc., etc.,etc. Nothing but one massive load of literary refuse.
This story is moderator delete-bait. They\'ll probably zap you too when they realize you\'re a seven-year-old in disguise.
This story is moderator delete-bait. They\'ll probably zap you too when they realize you\'re a seven-year-old in disguise.