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for Capture the Darkness

by OCNekoA

person Safir84
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start so far, I really like this! And I do too love Envy a lot, he and Ed're my favorite characters, so yeah...this is just so wicked cool!
The plot is awesome and so is the portrayal of the characters, especially Envy's, of course, haha! And the story is very well written, which is always a plus, I just wonder one thing though; which pairings is it going to be?! Personally I'm hoping for Ed/Envy, lauhgs, pretty please...!

Anyway, do continue on this amazingly kick ass story, please...bitte!



person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! continue please!
person AJAngelique
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! brutal....

What\'s going to happen next?!

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