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by lesyeuxatoi

person Awenseth
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was a wery interesting story, I liked it...
person Marumaru
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO!!! you must write more!!! i want to read more!!! please update!!!!!!
person priscel
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was different. I saw the sequeal.. and thought I should read the first. hmm ... it was interesting and I\'m glad it didn\'t end there. So onto the sequeal.
person NekuYasha
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.k., So this one is more grammatically sound, but OMG! That wasn\'t what I expected. Oh well, it was short and cute. ^_^ I really like the 3x4 pairing. I\'d like to say that I can\'t wait to see what happens from here, but I already read your new story that continues this. There\'s quite a bit not covered between the two stories and I\'d love to see what happens next. ^_~
person joyce
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. sex in the house of god. though some might find this type of story sacrilegious, i kinda wish there were more stories like this for 3x4. a multi chapter one with excellent plot .. and sex! hehehe
person Kila_SilverMoon
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this piece, please i\'m begging you write a sequel.
person jes me
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While a longer story with more details would have been nice, the fact that you ended it with \"amen\" made it so perfect that I can\'t offer any criticism. I feel kinda bad for Quatre, but...and poor Trowa too. He didn\'t get anything out of that. Maybe in a sequal?
person fruits of Eos
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EGODS that was HOT. dude, do a sequel, do a random chapter, do another story, i want moooreeeee. that was hooooottttt! would have been cool if you had taken this idea and made a longer story out of it, though random smut is still yummy ^^

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