rate_review Reviews

Hey! ::waves:: Well, it's a good story so far. However, the first chapter caught my attention in a rather annoying way. You see, I have this pet peeve on spelling errors, so please forgive me if I'm offending you but I just haveto correct it or I'll go crazy: I believe you meant to use D-O-W-N instead of dawn, W-H-I-C-H instead of witch, and W-A-I-T-I-N-G instead of weighting. Well, that's all I see right now-- oh wait, I think you also meant to use H-U-R-T-S instead of hearts in one sentence. Okay, that's all now (lol). I will probably let you know others the further I read, just so you know (gomen ne! ::sweatdrop::). Still, nice story so far! :) (:

Oh, and first person who reviewed: if you think that was CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, then you are sorely mistaken. That, what you just typed, constitutes as being rude in case you had no idea. There was no need to be harsh to the person just because you were agitated by some of the things in the story. For a nice, mature way of handling it, you might want to take a gander at my first review, though I'm very much aware that I'm being immature about this as well in this review. I just really don't like when someone misuses constructive criticism to hurt someone's feelings and to discourage them.

Again, so sorry about this, but I found two that I overlooked: I think you meant M-I-N-U-T-E-S instead of minuets (common mistake really... ^^), and F-O-L-L-O-W-I-N-G instead of fallowing. Okay, well, thanks for letting me do this! (Lol) Though it might be annoying you, I'm not entirely sure, but if so: I really am sorry but I've just got to, and really, the last thing I want is to make you feel stupid... <<. I mean, really, you don't need spell check MAJORLY (like the first reviewer seemed to hint at), but it really would improve the story, make it flow better for people who are obsessed like that...lol. ^^

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Hmm, still two more that I missed: I believe you meant M-E-T-A-L instead of mettle and W-O-R-S-E instead of wears. Ooo-- and I just noticed that the first person who reviewed has a spelling error as well, now that's particularly funny, seeing as how they were so bent on you using spell check for your spelling errors. First reviewer, if you may, I apologize for this as well but I like to be fair: I believe you meant G-R-A-M-M-A-R instead of grammer. Eh-heh-heh.... again, really sorry about that. ::blushes::

Damn, now I'm gonna haveto correct myself: I meant "if I may" rather than "if you may". Whoops... o.o. Okay, I'll just stop obsessing right now... lol.

Mary-sue alert!!! Plus no grammer and hello spellcheck people, it's there for a reason. Plus Albert Fisher was a real serial killer. Anyways, wouldn't recommend this story to anyone. That is all.