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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was soooo sweet and lustfilled romance i LOVE it!! *hugs*
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with you. Roy and Riza make a wonderful pairing. You made the entire scene seem so romantic. I pictured Roy being gentle like that. Too bad their careers get in the way but at least they had this one night together. You have a good writing style making me sympathize with the characters. You should write for real. Keep up the good work.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i luved it!! it was really good...really good descriptions of the feelings between roy and riza!!! FINALLY after lots of fanfics i\'ve read someone made it seem like Hawkeye wasn\'t some innocent virgin!! really good i hope to read more of your work!!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was just beautiful. You wrote it very well and I want you to write more Roy/Riza becausr you write that good. Thank you for this story and I hope you wirte more.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow! Please write more Roy/Riza fics. Please! There are like 7 in all, if that. You did a wonderful good. It was in character all the way through and you made it make sense even though the plot occurs relativly early in the series. Thank you for not making Roy all forceful like a rapist or Riza trigger happy like I\'ve seen in many of the other Royai fics out there. Great job, please write more. 5 out of 5!