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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*poke* Is there going to be any more of this any time soon?
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!!!
This story is so good I like every detail you have put in there. The way Vegeta and Goku met and the rest of the story is very interesting.
Please update soon, this is great!!!
This story is so good I like every detail you have put in there. The way Vegeta and Goku met and the rest of the story is very interesting.
Please update soon, this is great!!!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh!! Cool chapter.
I hope Kakarotto makes it home in time.
I hope Kakarotto makes it home in time.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... curiouser... and... curiouser...fascinating...indeed!
this is intriguing. can\'t wait to see how it ends.
[for the record: i enjoy your style. it not only speaks of a mature writer, but a mature reader-aka someone with life experience-can really appreciate the subtleties. things happen quickly in real life, and that is the pace you set. it\'s a wild roller coaster ride...it\'s fun, and I like it! ^_~ !
this is intriguing. can\'t wait to see how it ends.
[for the record: i enjoy your style. it not only speaks of a mature writer, but a mature reader-aka someone with life experience-can really appreciate the subtleties. things happen quickly in real life, and that is the pace you set. it\'s a wild roller coaster ride...it\'s fun, and I like it! ^_~ !
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. You\'ve done a great job with it so far. The lemons were nice, but the plot is what kept me reading.
I can\'t wait until you update. :)
I can\'t wait until you update. :)
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow drama
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY, another set of 5 great chapters. It is still very interesting, and your plot twists have made it even more so! Keep up the good work, and I hope to see more of this soon.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting...and a very good read. Looking forward to the rest of the story! After the day I had, this was just what I needed. Thanks! Thank you very much.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating. I like adventure stories. :D
I look forward to the rest.
I look forward to the rest.