rate_review Reviews

NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! You had me all hyped and then you crushed me. Write more soooooon!!!

All i would like to say is that this is by far one of the most interesting, alluring, and compelling stories that i have read so far! That's saying something seeing as how i hhave read quiet a few stories of all kinds stlye fashion and ways. This is one of the many few that I happen to fall in love with and had enough to review the author for. You have manage to do what few can you managed to captivate and hold my attention and you only did it with two chapters. All I have to say is keep up the good work and don't forget to have fun while writting. Because its not only about the story its how YOU feel about and for it as you write it don't let it become a chore that has to be done because ok. SO yeah have fun keep up the excellant work.

Ja ne, until next time

Your friend Black Dragon Pheonix

I do hope you update soon. This looks very interesting.

>.< Ow! I love it!! i.i Please, finish it . ^^ I would be soooooooo happy!!

I luf ur story and its good to hear that ull update?/Write? sooner :) tho with a block..thats tough...(know all about that hehe) good luck!
Ja ne!! (now people can insult my jap hehe)

That was real good. You need to write more please. *Big Puppy Dog Eyes* I really want to know waht Duo worte on that paper. I also want to know what he is going to do to Herro. So PLEASE Write some more and do it fast. I have to admit I have read a lot of Dou Herro fanfic and this one is the best that I have read on this web site.