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read part one and loved it...and now mpreg muwhahahahaha you have made my already lovley day

Oh please say it's Gohan who's pregers.

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And the pregnant behaviour looks about right, I can still remember when my moms friend Lorraine was pregnant, I think her husband was about ready to snog me when I discovered that my back rub technique could calm her down.

This is great! I am definately liking how it is panning out so far. Mirai and Trunks getting so pissed and horny that they try to screw each other classic! confused goten and gohan practically doing things before Goku and Vegeta show up was also good. Hmmm... if Vegeta and Goku.... nah all six having an orgy would be to odd.

Dark Pearl: Now all four boys having sex that is more realstic. I read one like that once called four on the floor it was pretty good. So I can see a foursome between Gohan Goten Trunks and Mtrunks a lot more easily and man could you imagine if anyone in that got pregnant?
I mean if it was Gohan and Goten it would be hard to tell which Trunks was the father
because having the brothers knock each other up is kinky but asking for all loads of problems in real life. However this is fanfiction so... what the heck?

Nutsy: Fanfiction kicks ass doesn't it? I mean you read all the thinks that would make you raise at least an eyebrow or call the cops if it was real life but in fanfiction with fake people that are totally hot it's all good.

Okay weird weather bringing on weird thoughts

Galacia Dark Pearl and Nutsy

This story is really good. It's amoung the few DBZ stories that I actually like. Would you consider adding a few more chapters soon?

Yeah you are going to finish the story! (Jumps with glee) I thought you gave up on the story and I was so sad. Yeah Yeah Yeah!

And another fantastic chapter I love Vegeta's blow up at the boys, priceless! :) And what a cliffhanger, I can't wait to see who is pregnant! I can't wait to see what happens!

this was lovely, been a while since i read it though

Please update soon! I hope you haven't decided to stop writing I wanted to see Vegeta have his baby. (tears forming) Please update! (sniff)

OH MY HELL NO! You cannot stop there!!! You have to update! Like SOON. Mirai kissing Trucks... and Gohan and Goten watching... ::Thinks a moment:: Trucks kissing Trunks... ::OMG Faints:: That is about as hot as Vegeta kissing Vegeta! This story is awesome. I've read both parts in one sitting. Please do continue. I just really got into the whole DBZ thing... Been a fan of Vegeta forever never really read the fanfics... I got distracted by Kurama and Hiei (whom I write on here about). Anyway! Please do update... really soon... I wanna know what happens!

Hahahaha!!! Yes! I knew it! I love bringing that proud monkey of a prince down to his knees (not just cus that would be hot as hell) back to his, heehee, child-bearing ancestry or what not. Hee, cant wait to keep reading. :P Much Luv