rate_review Reviews

i love this story ... i wish the chapter was longer, but i still love it anyway

YES! YES! YES! You have updated and a fantastic chapter at that. Oh I hope Gohan goes after M.Trunks. This made my day (after having a truley sucky day at that) I was so excited to read and see what happened next. PLEASE keep writing! This is a great story and you\'ll have me reading it until you decide its complete! Thanks again for making my day and have a great Thanksgiving...and (again) PLEASE KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOON!

*eyes cookies and documents dubiously* Um... you can keep those.

Any way, *SOBS* No Mir, come back! He didn\'t even stick around to get a possible ass chewing. *sighs* Go get him Gohan!


I am going to hold you to your promise. I hope those crossed fingers were for good luck.

there is a distinct lack of kissing, dammit. did you do this on purpose? XD

*finds satisfaction that \"the conversation\" is going to happen soon*

That\'s bad...doing that to Trunks! I know Gohan misses his koi too, but damned....all these miserable things happening between them, all their missunderstandings....how will they ever get back together?

I know what that is like I don\'t think I\'ve finished any of mine that is why I don\'t really post any of mine. Because I lose track where I am. I have to my credit finished a one shot that I am pretty proud of. But that is about it. Just promise to continue!
Poor Mirai, poor Gohan. I liked the first one and hope they get back together soon. Awww.... Mirai wants to be a \"mom\" that is so cute! Sorry side thought there. I hope they get back together, preferably before Mirai makes plans to kill Chibi Trunks AND excute them. Because then poor Goten would be sad.

Jynx: Sad chibis? NO SAD CHIBIS!!!! Poor Mirai! YOU BE NICER TO MY MIRAI NOW!!!!!

Galacia: Hex, uhm could you?

(Hex leads his distraught twin to a room where... well we don\'t need to discuss what Jynx sees there but it cheers her up a lot.)

Hex: That should take care of that. Sheesh we have got to do something with her Mirai addiction.

Galacia: Addiction. Good word at least she doesn\'t want him as her sex slave. Like Nutsy wants Vegeta to be.
(Shakes head to block out any disturbing thoughts of Nutsy doing heaven knows what to the poor saiyan prince.)

Well we love part one and are looking forward to more of part 2!

good but why you picking on poor trunks he is so sensitive

both of them are being assholes. i\'d like to knock them BOTH one. particularly gohan. -_-

but... what\'s this about goten seeing them together? *sing song voice* i smell debauchery! >=D

Poor Mirai... he has no place in the current situations going on around him. *sighs sadly* I hope things work out soon.

I love it!! The scene with Goku and Vegeta was sooooo cute:) More don\'t stop writing! I want to see what type of baby Vegeta has! Do Gohan and Miria get back together? I hope so. Don\'t stop, keep writing!!!PLEASE!