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Oh, I feel so bad for Gohan, but in a way I don\'t also. He was the one who sent Miria away in the first place. I just wish he knew how to get into contact with Miria, before either of them goes to far and feels that they can\'t return.

Ah, that was awfully sweet between Goku and Vegeta. Of course, I don\'t know why Vegeta would think anything else would have come from Goku. *scratches head*

That was an awsome chapter. That part with Vegeta and Goku was so cute! I can\'t wait to see Goku deal with the mood swings of a pregnant Vegeta (sinckers)! And you can\'t help but fell sorry for Gohan I hope they get back together. Please don\'t stop writing, keep going!! PLEASE!

Sorry to say, but I think I can out do you in the sap department *GRINS* Wonderful chapter as always, again, wonderful new title! And email me leave_leaf_alone@yahoo.com if you wanna read my fics, I\'ll be all too happy to send them your way...working on the next chapter, but it is going to take me a while...~_~ Most of the time i\'m tired and too sore to work on it after my regular duties and shit. Oh, and if there are any words you can\'t read in this, its cause I can\'t see to fix my typos...too lazy to get off my ass and put my glasses back on! (Sorata afraid to have anyone beta my work, I don\'t like the idea of anyone changing what I\'ve writen even if some of it is gramaticaly wrong and mispelled...its still well put together and some of the lines I type out are amazing! If I do say so myself!)

VERY good tittle! Two thumbs up!

how about you call it, The Triles of Parenthood...or something like that...I\'m not sure what your story is going to be about, but you\'ve gotta realize that a good title matches the story.

IT WAS AWSOM TELL ME MORE I AM DYING TO HEAR MOR PLEAS AWSOM STORY

Yeah, I loved it! This was a great chapter! I can\'t wait for the story to progress, Don\'t stop writting!
MORE,MORE,MORE

YAY.... You started on another one. hehe, it\'s a good thing you set the limit at 6 or 7 lemons, I was going to say 100 before I read that part. :) It\'ll be good that things get resolved. *nods* I hope this angsty moment in this chapter turns out alright.

i am glad that u are back can wait to see what u got next gohan and mirai action is good (hint hint ) hope u update soon

I liked your first chapter, however, you could have been more creative with the title then Additional Lemons...~_~ Especially since this little PWP has developed a plot no matter how much you want to deny it. Anyways! Keep up the hard work and I look forward to future reviews.