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Great story i like it

I love you story.....please update.....that other person is an idiot.

This reminds me A LOT of Merry Gentry. And I mean A LOT. The plot is eerily similar with only a few minor changes that make it borderline orginal. I personally think this fic is a form of plagarism due to the striking similarities of yer story and Hamilton\'s stuff. You might come back and say you have no idea what I\'m talking about but I highly doubt it. No one comes up with a plot line involving the fey so similar of character backgrounds and certains names unless they\'ve read the series since fey books don\'t include the part about sidhe marrying for children.

This story rox! Hope Trunks doesn\'t do anything stupid out of jealousy. UPDATE SOON!!!

WELL? WHERE\'S THE REST OF THE STORY?

YOU CAN OBVIOUSLY COOK UP A GOOD PLOT IF YOU TRY....YOU\'RE PRETTY DAMN GOOD....
AND I ENJOYED READING THIS STORY TOO...SO IF YOU COULD PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTERS PLEASE?
THANKS

UPDATE SOON!!!

I love dis story! UPDATE SOON!!! Bit of advice though...if this is supposed to be NC17 then it should have more violence, profanity, rape, lemon, etc. U know?

Okay, the way you portray the Unseelie is very familiar... Are you a fan of Laurell K. Hamilton? Specifically of LKH\'s Merry Gentry series, because everything is.... Well at least you used original characters and none of the ones from the series. At least from what I can recall off the top of my head. Were you just inspired or what, if you were and it is a crossover I would personally have mentioned it in the disclaimer. All in all, nice work. I can\'t wait for an update. Oh, by the way, is Trunks getting paired up with Kyara? If this is xovered with MG, are you going to add hands of power?

In responce, yes. This was heavily inspired by LKH\'s Merry Series. Whether or not there will be \"hands of power\" remains to be seen. Kyara\'s telekinetic powers so far seem just to be innate ability. Would I call it a cross over? I don\'t know. So far, there is no race to conceive, no evil cousin (although, in later chapters, her half-brother will put Cinderella\'s step-sisters to shame). I doubt I will head down that road. Many surprises to come, including revealing certain characters heritages that have thus far been concealed.