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November 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It was a great story. Poor Edward. I kind of wish to know if he ever does tell anyone or what happens next.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Exactly how this kind of fic should be. Psychological and physical work in perfect unity.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh.my.fucking.god......this story actually brought tears to my eyes......poor Ed-sama!!!!!!!! Poor Trisha! Honenhiem needs to die!
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
I really have no idea why I sat down to read this, as it's not really the kind of thing I enjoy, but I'm glad I did. Painful and soul-wrenching, like I'm sure it was intended to be. Your portrayal of Ed rang true to me, and it was real enough to make me want him to tell someone, like screaming at the screen when you're watching a horror movie. Total immersion.
I really have no idea why I sat down to read this, as it's not really the kind of thing I enjoy, but I'm glad I did. Painful and soul-wrenching, like I'm sure it was intended to be. Your portrayal of Ed rang true to me, and it was real enough to make me want him to tell someone, like screaming at the screen when you're watching a horror movie. Total immersion.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(flails and bites her knuckles and OMG) I totally enjoyed this. I think I enjoyed it too much. I trembled throughout the whole fic in anticipation of the next paragraph -- your portrayal of this was absolutely freakin\' fantabulous. I\'m bouncing in my seat over this! Great job, great job indeed.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...ow. This just -hurts-. Really, really cuts straight through to the bone. Poor -Ed-.
Hohenheim is just... so evenly -cruel- that it hurts to think about. And what he says while he\'s doing it... *shudders* Lovely and dark and well-done, though I find myself longing for a sequel in which someone helps the poor boy come to terms with it. ;_;
Hohenheim is just... so evenly -cruel- that it hurts to think about. And what he says while he\'s doing it... *shudders* Lovely and dark and well-done, though I find myself longing for a sequel in which someone helps the poor boy come to terms with it. ;_;
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
;_; poor ed!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This Hohenhiem remaninds me a lot of Bluebird\'s Illision\'s Hohenhiem, and that let me scheechless, really nice story, I like it
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DiE! BASTARD Hohenhiem!! Errg!! How dare you do that to poor Ed-kun?!?! *cries* Poor Ed-kun!
*Grabs onto Ed-kun and starts calming him down* There there, Ed-kun, its ok! That nasty man won\'t ever do that to you again, if he VALUES HIS JEWELS!! *ROAR*
I loved it! But I hated how por Ed-kun was treated! He didn\'t deserve it!, Yet I liked it! Oye, am I a pot of contridictions or what? ^^lol
*Grabs onto Ed-kun and starts calming him down* There there, Ed-kun, its ok! That nasty man won\'t ever do that to you again, if he VALUES HIS JEWELS!! *ROAR*
I loved it! But I hated how por Ed-kun was treated! He didn\'t deserve it!, Yet I liked it! Oye, am I a pot of contridictions or what? ^^lol
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I love FMA stories that have incest+angst, especially when they are this well written. Good job!