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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow nice i cna't wait for the next chapter
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffies are such a good thing. Nice shift from the one-shot, but it is flowing nicely. The only semi-negative comment I have is the excessive use of 'fuck'. Is Goku using it for deliberate shock value, or is that the only type of sex he has known - just sex, no heart, no love, no passion. He still feels outwardly closed - like he won't let anyone see past his mask, even while he complains about wearing one. Wonder what was going through Vegeta's head during Goku's week of wigging out. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh, you left it there?! You had better update soon dear!
A lovely bit of angst and drama. So good to see you back in action!
A lovely bit of angst and drama. So good to see you back in action!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter 1 : intriguing
chapter 2 : cute...very cute ... and funny!
chapter 3 : don't hesitate to write it...
chapter 2 : cute...very cute ... and funny!
chapter 3 : don't hesitate to write it...
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe.... I loved the guessing game part. That was a neat twist. Nice job.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written introspective. Nice job.