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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really, really like this.
I’m trying to put the finger on just what it was that appealed to me so much… certainly the writing was great… and the lemon was so….not-at-all-cliché.^^ But I think it was the turns to philosophy… hm, the thoughtful depth, like in: “I am his captive, his slave, his freedom.” Things like that. Adds such nice spice, it does.
(Hope that made sense)
I’m trying to put the finger on just what it was that appealed to me so much… certainly the writing was great… and the lemon was so….not-at-all-cliché.^^ But I think it was the turns to philosophy… hm, the thoughtful depth, like in: “I am his captive, his slave, his freedom.” Things like that. Adds such nice spice, it does.
(Hope that made sense)
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful and sad. You did such a wonderful job with this. *sighs* I just wish, for Vegeta, that the lemon hadn\'t just been a dream.
You word usage was awesome and inspiring.
I hope to read more from you soon, although this one looked to be a stand alone.
Excellent job.
You word usage was awesome and inspiring.
I hope to read more from you soon, although this one looked to be a stand alone.
Excellent job.