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my god that may be the best fma story on this site

This fic is great! It's short, but it's so much fun to read, not to mention it's one of the few fics that don't include the words "Roy", "Ed" and "Yaoi" in the same sentence. w00t!. Also, I'm glad I'm not the only one whe thinks Scieska is adorable, this whole section needs more Scieska. LOL!

That was pretty good, but my favorite part was with Ed and Winry, when the dog came in & they were having sex. Also, you spelled the grammy's name wrong. I don't know how to spell it, but I know that there is an i after the p. Great job, even thou there was only one Ed/Win thing. Sorry, but I think that Ed/Win lemonly stories are the best there are. Thanxs! :) :p ;)

Hey you know you forgot to put Rose and Ed togheter, in bed I mean (sp), so are you goona finish the story or are you already done? Cause I'de (sp) really like to see some more. Please!!

a very humorous story(among other things), i kno you said it was the end,but please add a Ed/Lust and Ed/Rose. And continue the gay Mustang thing.good story

Personally? I adored this story. I thought this was a humorous story, and it made me laugh.

bravo!
that was great,hilarious!you realy captured the humorous side of the series,i specialy liked the part when Winry keeps throwing tools at Ed because he's having sex with Izumi.
(by the way,i'm pretty sure Winry's grandmother's name is Penoko not Poneko,but who cares)
i hope you'll write more chapters.maybe with Lust(i've always had a thing for bad girls :D )

Who told you Maria Ross was Ed's mom? She's not...Trisha Elric is...and well, she died. Second Lieutenant Maria Ross is the chick with the really REALLY short hair who's always with Sergeant Brosh and has the mole under her eye. Anyway all the better it was a funny story. It kept me entertained.

Ross is not Ed and Als mom, the Humungulos that works as the ferers secritary is their mother or at least looks like her, the humongulos look like a person that an alchemist tries to bring back to life, ross saved winry from that humongulos, oh and if you still don't have cable the Ferer you know the guy with the eye patch whos in charge of the military is a humogulos (his mark is on his eyeball covered by the patch, it allows him to see anything or so it seems) and order Ed killed and to made it look like the people of leor the city from the first episode did it so the military can conquer it, oh and Rose the girl with the dark hair in back and pink hair in front has a baby know didn't say if it was eds or not or even hers but she was help prisoner by the army and apairently rape by them and she has not spoken since then.

Err...Maria isn't his mom. Whoever told you that needs to go back and watch a little more closely. Or maybe the dubbed version screwed up the translation but no, definitely is NOT his mother. He thinks it's his mother when she hugs him 'cause he's all jacked up on the redstone stuff. Um yeah. This coming from a person who's seen the entire japanese subbed (well might I add) series. So yeah, Ed doing Maria is all cool.