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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool write more please oh did you read my last review that girl that ed got busy with maria ross ( i think thats her name) is his mom they said it on the show winry found out about her and she said it was there moms face ( but not to ed and al )
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey what happend to the rest of the chapters you know 10,11,12 im pretty sure you made them and now there gone Oh and by the way didnt you say you lost your cable and you dont know whats happening on your anime well it turns out that girl that Ed slept with maria ross was Ed and Al's mom how occword is that he slept with his own mother!!Please respond
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think the storys great is there going to be more
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You seemed to have mixed up the singular and plural form of \"homonculus\". You see, if you\'re talking about one of them, it\'s \"homonculus\". If you\'re talking about 2 or more, it\'s \"homonculi\".
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! For a story that\'s not yaoi, it\'s actually good! Funny, too--I love how you made Al a smart-ass, cracking on his big brother. But I know he wishes to be in his shoes. I couldn\'t stop grinning as I was reading this. I hope you\'ll have more out soon, and find out who\'ll screw Ed next! Too bad....*sigh*....^_- EM
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey I like the update keep it up and hopefully you update the next chapter and this is a good read keep up the good writing
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was awsome u gotta continue this
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah, I see....the experimentation phase... ah...dirty/ yet awesome!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Saliva =/= functional Lube
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"I\'m going to ride you like a train\" I cacked myself laughing. COOL FIC!