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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey I like the story it is pretty good and how you describe their bodies you could imagine what they look like naked and there bodies getting weak by having sex
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ha ha ha ha ha, I wonder if Izumi is goign to come to visit neh? ha ha ha, wow, I love this full metal fic. It\'s awesome. although, you can\'t really call it a fic, it\'s more like finely tuned must with a plot! oh well, I like it anyways! keep it up!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s like a porn witha plot... sorta....It\'s terribly amusing though. Normally I just read yaoi lately but I dont think I wasted my time on this one. Keep up the good work.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kkoolchap
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"If you\'re giving rides, I might as well hop on.\"
...I am so terribly amused right now I think I might die ^^ This is such a necessary fic, right here...we fen always write as if everybody\'s lusting after Ed, but not to the point where anybody EVER makes a move on him :-/ I\'m dying to see if Hawkeye catches him in the shower, that would be fucking hot.
...I am so terribly amused right now I think I might die ^^ This is such a necessary fic, right here...we fen always write as if everybody\'s lusting after Ed, but not to the point where anybody EVER makes a move on him :-/ I\'m dying to see if Hawkeye catches him in the shower, that would be fucking hot.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ha, yes, finally, Ross is getting a little loving ! ha ya~!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great FINALLY a fic that has Ed in all his jailbait lovelyness plowing through the FMA hotties! I\'m getting so tired of elrist and roy and ed so boring. I like how it was Roy asking Ed about his orientation very funny. Riza was great to very cute and smart please I am so looking forward to the next chapter this is great! I recomend \'Kaoru\'s expicades\' on my favorites list for inspiration:)
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
could the chaps plz be longer? looking 4ward to the rest of ur story
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hell yeah, finally some straight action going on for the Elric brothers! ...or at least Ed. I\'m thinking the only kind Al will ever get as a suti of armor is from Winry and that\'s cause she\'s amachien freak..I\'m thinking...in \'smut world\' she could be a machine freaky deeky. Anyways, I liekd the lemons and I\'m REALLY looking forward to the next few. I\'m guessing that the one with Izumi is gonna be \'rough\' neh? ha ha ha ha