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by pepper01

person kittycat
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gosh! OH MY GOSH! That was THE BEST STORY I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!! Please up date as soon as possible!!!!!!
person Sarong Luv
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear Author,

Lke the story I hope you make more soon. Maybe something funny, weird making Duo a smart on Heero if he catches him like if they travel together Duo know a lot of things in places he'd been too or things that had happen to him or somthing. Sorry (nervous laugh) I really love stories especially other peoples stories (small laughs).
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that's so sad. *sniff sniff* i'm almost to tears.
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hair pins in the hands of a lock picker tend to be handy should they need to escape.
person Outlaw Angel
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon...I wanna know what Heero will do with Duo when he catches him
getting out of his room...or something horrible you know??...really so please make new
chappies I will wait until you make new ones...better then this one....Update soon
person Outlaw Angel
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please updaaaattteeeeee.....I need to know what will become of those two.....
Please please update soon....and by the way I love where your story is
heading but please update as soon as you can...
person Aidan eiram
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOoooo!!! I\'d like to read more and I\'m hope that this did end half way. So please write more, thank you!
person Aidan eiram
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I do have bad grammer, what I meant, was that I hope this didn\'t die half way.
person Alexokerry
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting premise. There are quite a few problems with spelling and grammar that distract from the storyline. May I suggest looking into getting a beta to help with these? You\'ve got the talent, all you need is someone that can help you find the weak spots and straighten things out. Hope to see more from you.
person Sarah
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story so far. Could you please put me on your story update email list thing? I would really appreciate it.

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