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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love It. Please keep writing.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You seriously need to spell-check and read-over your chapters . BEFORE you post them . The story line is great , but your killing it . Also , draw a line or something between different POV\"s , the story will be less confusing then .
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story concept, but try to work on keeping the story in the same tense. If you can find someone to beta read it, that\'d really help.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was fast lol.....can ya do that again ? ..guess i\'ll keep you
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what\'s in the bundle? huh? update soon ..