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for The Art of Manipulation.

by shinigamitenshi

person Em
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again, this was marvelous. I am seriously starting to fall in love with your writing. And now I wish you were an artist too. I would worship you then. But for now I can simply live with the fact that you write. I love your details. In my opinion, people leave the small little things out that make a story good. But you put every little thing in and it really makes me feel like I am watching a movie. And the fact that your grammar and spelling are nearly perfect. Excellent! ^^
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BTW, why is the American school system hard to understand? We simply stay in High school until 18 then go to college or a university. And thankfully not all teachers have those crappy desks in their rooms. Jsut so you know! ;)
person Fifi_McFu
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*twitching hentai heap on floor*
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
phew, it is hot in here or is it just me? That was beyond sexy, I must comend you *applauds* I was damn near orgasming along with them. Very hot and very well written at the same time. I love it.

And I -love- manipulative, sex kitten Rei. <3<3<3
person lunartigergurl
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh like majorly wow!!!!!!!!!!
It doesn\'t get any better than this, right? Are you going to update? Maybe a...sequel thing...? I don\'t know...just write more...
person NJWolf
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! that was some story!!! i just love the dark Kai mixing with the good Rei thing... i love them so much!!! you know, i\'ve been looking for a story this good for so long now! it totaly rocks!!! theres actoually no words to describe how i feel! thanx!!!
NJW*
person Tyson
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so pro! I LOVED IT!!! hehehe but yea ITS GREAT LOL
person Liz
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, talk about wow! nice story i don\'t really go for Ray and Kai coupling but that was a great fic. Good Job
person person
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t! T3h }{4w7n355! j00 |{1c|{ /\\/\\4j0r 455. 7}{47 f1c \\/\\/45 r34||y 5m3xy. <3

(Translation: w00t! The hotness! You kick major ass. That fic was really sexy. *heart*)
person Crystal Rose
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Nothing´s better than to read some REALLY good KaixRei smut! This was great! Write more stories like this soon!

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