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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::shiver::
WOW! That was fantastic!! SOOO hot! Great story!
WHOOPS! Slipped out of my chair ::blush::
WOW! That was fantastic!! SOOO hot! Great story!
WHOOPS! Slipped out of my chair ::blush::
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh my! Toys + seme turned uke + good writing. I really like this fic!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You´re GREAT!!! I cant think of another word. This was pretty hot and I really enjoyed Duo being the doninant (I prefer it that way) please write more soom...
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Delicious PWP!
I loved the way you were gradually making Heero relax into Duo\'s ministrations. That stuff was HOT!
Mainly two things that caught my eyes: You letDuo knock out Heero by using a skin-contact sedative that Duo transmitted by kissing. A very interesting idea that I liked very much - except that logic demanded that Duo should have been knocked out by it long before Heero (Duo didn\'t have any protection against it, did he, and he had been in contact with it for much longer). Oh, and the second thing is that at the end of chapter2, you silence Heero with a gag-ball, and in chapter3, you have him talking without ever taking the gag-ball out. I don\'t think that should be possible - it would completely defeat the purpose of a gag-ball...
But, despite those two tiny faults, you\'ve done an awesome job with your story! I know how hard it is writing such stuff, trying to find the right mixture to make it sound believable without letting the mood slip - I think you have found a great balance there, and you have creatively used lots of stuff that sounds... interesting to say the least. Thanks for sharing that fantasy!
Sakiku
I loved the way you were gradually making Heero relax into Duo\'s ministrations. That stuff was HOT!
Mainly two things that caught my eyes: You letDuo knock out Heero by using a skin-contact sedative that Duo transmitted by kissing. A very interesting idea that I liked very much - except that logic demanded that Duo should have been knocked out by it long before Heero (Duo didn\'t have any protection against it, did he, and he had been in contact with it for much longer). Oh, and the second thing is that at the end of chapter2, you silence Heero with a gag-ball, and in chapter3, you have him talking without ever taking the gag-ball out. I don\'t think that should be possible - it would completely defeat the purpose of a gag-ball...
But, despite those two tiny faults, you\'ve done an awesome job with your story! I know how hard it is writing such stuff, trying to find the right mixture to make it sound believable without letting the mood slip - I think you have found a great balance there, and you have creatively used lots of stuff that sounds... interesting to say the least. Thanks for sharing that fantasy!
Sakiku
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutly love it this story was amazing
more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!