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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaiii!!! Upadate! *tackleglomps Jen* You rock! Man, I have to tell you the tension in this is fabulous between Kai and Tyson! *growls* I just wanna strangle Voltaire though. >_< Keep up the fantastic work, Jen!!!!!!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man this is cool. Hope Tyson gets away from that asshole. Hope Voltaire rots in hell for what he did to Tyson\'s family. Will his Dad, Ray and the Demo. boys be in this story? Will Max and Kenny catch up with Tyson? Glad he doesn\'t hate Maxie. Update soon please. Can\'t wait to see more. By the way what does Arai mean?
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is english not your first language?? There are a few missplaced and missed used words. Example: use the word \'captured\' and not \'captivated\'
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness, Kai was there to save Takao. But, what kind of disguise is Kai talking about? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay this is SO good! Please update soon!
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI!! your story is great. i only rreaad the prologe and the first chapter.. and i guess it would be tough to sleep tonight without finishing it. so update quick. it is GREAT!!!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Okay...how long has this been sitting on your comp, Jen!? LOL \'Cause it\'s fantastic!!!! Totally awesome and original idea you\'ve got going for the plot, too (but then your plots are always wicked!). I was sniffling after the first chapter...and I wanted to hug poor Tyson by the end of the third. !!__!! Pook kid. Lucky for him \"Phoenix\" came along and saved his butt, huh? ~_^ Keep up the fantastic work on this, Jen! Definately a gem of a fic here!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! You have wonderful ideas and I would so love to read more of this for sure! So PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah man. Glad Ty\'s safe. Hope Max and Kenny do set out to find him and succeed. That asshole Voltaire needs to go down harsh and fast. Boris too I hope. Looking forward to an update. Soon please?
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!! Please continue!!