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by Pixelgoddess

person LisaB
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow, not your usual stuff at all, but powerful and sensual. I could just see Vegeta through Radditz\'s eyes, murdering, methodically going through the ritual. The images were bloody, yet the pain came through. I had an idea for this contest, but yours is much better! *shivers* Very cool fic.
person enya of nexcuss
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
INTRIGUING, IT REALLY IS...
EXPLORING THE BOUNDRIES OF THE TRUE SAIYAN NATURE VERY COOL...
BUT NOW THAT I HAVE YOUR ATTENTION, I WOULD LIKE TO SUBMIT A CHALLENG OF MY OWN TO YOU ^_^,
PRETTY PLEASE DO A SIDE STORY OR A 1 SHOT ABOUT THE DRUM RITUAL IN MAINTAINING,
I HAVE WAITING FOR YOU TO DO SOMETHING WITH IT FOR A LOOOOONNNNGG TIME...
PLEASE CONSIDER IT AND I HOPE TO READ IT IN THE NEAR FUTURE

ENYA
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this one-shot, it\'s great. Really well-written, from both points of view.
Also a nice view on Vegeta\'s motives on becoming supposedly \'good\'.
Actually, I like almost any well-written story with Raditz (if he isn\'t portrayed badly of course),
but anyway, I think you both portrayed both Raditz and Vegeta very well, as well as their relationship.
person Alastair (nl)
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... *faints* That was gorgeous! Mmmm ... nakie Vegeta ...

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