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September 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yo! I love this fic! You have a great since of humor and your characters are compelling. I really hope to see another chapter soon. Keep up the great work!
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September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I Looooooove where this is going the characterization is awesome!! Please continue!!
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was actually a good little fic - hate to see you being so hard on yourself. So, I agree with anon about the AC grate, but other than that...not bad at all. ;)
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I like it. It\'s funny. Dominant Goku is entertaining.
I like it. It\'s funny. Dominant Goku is entertaining.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well can\'t say much. So far so good. Remember details. um I hope u right more. Can\'t wait to read the yaoiy parts. well um um kind of am out of it so good luck and lost of lemony yaoi kisses. Keep safe.
Jen
*P*L*H*
Jen
*P*L*H*
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where the hell\'s the rest of it?! Y\'can\'t just stop there! Well, the change in Goku\'s personality is truly intriguing. Why did it happen? XD I can just imagine the chase! It\'s awesome! Wonderful job, for writing it in a day.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad read at all, actually, albeit a little short. I certainly wouldn\'t mind seeing more of it, since your writing style is very readable, despite being unbeta\'d (I didn\'t see much in the way of errors). It is always nice to see Goku acting up. I liked reading Vegeta running away, that brought a smile to my face. It is futile, my little Prince. Anyway, I hope you will write more, this is a solid start.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good but where is the rest ?
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, it\'s a PWP, with tails. We\'re all good with that. Goku\'s libido went supersaiyajin. Fine with that.
But why would Vegeta, of all people, be unable to open a ventilation shaft grate?
But why would Vegeta, of all people, be unable to open a ventilation shaft grate?
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a good beggining. I would love to see Goku catch Vegeta ;) Keep writing!