rate_review Reviews

I just have one thing really. I noticed that you misspelled defense, there should be an "s" where the "c" is, like I just spelled actually (lol). I really enjoyed your story, this is probably the third time I've read it, and I feel so bad for not commenting the first time.... <<. I thought I did... ><. Well, anyway, here's your review! :) (:

Oh crap, that was another story. My bad, I did already comment on this one... lol. Oy... lol. ^^

Offense is also spelled with an "s" instead of a "c". Heh, gomen ne! ^^ ::sweat drop::

Oh wow... I'm so sorry, I've read this before but I didn't review! >< Huh... now what to say? I really love how you put this piece together, it stayed true to both the anime and manga and it couldn't have been more perfect. Not too many stories out there do that, or are able to do that, but it's always so refreshing to come across one that does. ^^ Beautiful... simply beautiful. I hope to read more from you! :) (:

Unbelievable.
I can honestly say I've never seen an Ed/Winry fic so beautifully written, nor so closely attuned to their characters. I especially liked that analogy about Ed and his automail, 'evidence of a hard and soft side.'
Hope to see more such masterpieces. Wonderful work

That was very well crafted; good plot leading up to "the act" itself. What more can I say?

YAY!!!! Best Win/Ed fic EVER!!!!! Thank you soooo much! I've been looking all day for something worth reading and I find this! I seriously loved it so much. So in character but still so tender and sweet. Thank you SO MUCH!!!

That was deep, really deep. The constant flashbacks, indepth storyline, the inner most thoughts of the characters. This story was absolutely amasing. Please keep up the good work and keep the stories coming. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Till next time, later.

I believe this is the most beautifully written Ed/Winry lemon I have ever read. The poetic quote you used at the beginnig of the story fit their relationship really well. Your style and ability to capture the readers\' attention was evident in your words and the synopsis. The quietness on the surface and the emotional turmoil laying underneath really drew me to the story.The character developments were exquisitely compelling. You gave them good reasons to justify their response and actions. And you were able to keep their characters in check. There were a few errors in the writing. You may want to have your story edited next time if you want to shoot for perfection. But nonetheless, the story\'s remarkable.
I also had the chance to read your RK one-shots and they were just as awesome as this one. Especially \"Whisper\", it had a similar anguish tone with this story and the bitterness and sweetness of it was just irresistable. I just wonder why you put your RK one-shots under a different account (assuming I am not mistaken you as someone else). Anyway, hope you don\'t mind me sort of combining two reviews into one.
Well, keep writing and best of luck to you with future projects.

OH! This was soooo good i loved it sooo much! Keep up the good work!