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That was great. Go Ed and Winry. Just some spelling and grammer errors, but the story\'s great! P.S. I can\'t spell either so don\'t worry, you aren\'t alone!

Hey Eden this is a good fic I like it and that is true between Ed and Winry. They have feelings for each other but they never show it I am glad you wrote this fic and keep it up this was a good read

This was beautifull. I really love it. I love EdxWinry, this fic was dealt with a lot of emotions it made me feel happy and sad. Really liked the fact that it was not JUST sex, it was a form of affection.Very good work I hope to read more FMP works from you.

Oh wow, that was really good.

There were a few spelling errors but sometimes that just happens.

But that was definitely really really good. I loved the flashbacks, and all the emotion, especially from Ed. This was really quite wonderful.

Very well written. I loved how you include the childhood memories. It added to the story and really brought out thier relationship.

OMG SO LONG BUT, SO GOOD~~!!!


Wonderfully written.

Oops. Sorry, I forgot to mention something in my last review. Sorry. ^^; While your writing was awesome, I think it was slightly hampered by the errors. There was a bit too many of them. My advice is to let someone ELSE proof-read your story so that there aren\'t so many silly mistakes. The errors didn\'t ruin the story for me, though, that\'s for sure. I still love it!

Aiiiieeee! That. Was. Frickin\'. BEATUIFUL. Seriously, one of the best EdxWinry fics. Right up there was \"Summer Heat\", \"Autumn Rain\" and \"Rountine Maintance\". Except THIS one had a very awesome plot... and very beautiful feel to the reason behind it all. It was like the ultimate comfort for poor Ed, who surely needs human contact when he shins himself from it. I like how you had that underlying theme instead of just usual smut. That was the greatest twist and made this story unqiue from most on this site. I applaud you and I really hope you write more EdxWinry stories! I\'d certainly read them! (BTW, I\'m totally envious of your mad writing skillz!)

i loved this! It was so sweet. Beyond that, the writing was just fabulous. Descriptive and emotive- wonderful work. write more!!

Wow, this was the nicest Ed/Winry fic I\'ve read. Seriously. I love how you show that Winry is so important to their lives, and then the sex itself...it was beautifully done. Bravo <3