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I would love to read about those babies being born. And For Atomique to returnto help her friends out.

This is gettin' good, the visions Mixing in with baby shower.

Please continue this, I love this story. I read it over and over again

Wow, I never thought you could blend Kiss and full metal alchemist with dbz so well.
Please write another chapter.

I have just finished reading your story and it is absolutely wonderful. I love the way you presented Radditzu and I adore your original character, Atomique. Please continue this story!! I like the way you take two individuals who may not have the physical beauty admired by this world, and turn them and their love into something beautiful and deep. It is a refreshing and new love story. I am also dying to see how the children are born, how they interact with the rest of the DBZ world. Will they stay in this dimention or will they go with their elder brothers back to the other. Please keep writing. I am eagerly waiting.....

I TOTALY LOVE THESE NEW CHAPTERS, AND I REALLY HOPE
THAT YOU'LL BE ADDING MORE CHAPTERS REALLY SOON....ANYHOO
KEEP UP THE GRATE WORK O.K...."OHH!! BEFOR I FORGET HAVE A
MARRY CHIRSTMASS & A HAPPY NEW YEAR, LUV :)

TOTALY LOVED THE NEW CHAPTER....ANDTHE LEMON WAS YUM, YUM, YUMMY MORE PLEASE
{EVIL LITTLE HENTAI GRIN:)}....ANYHOO KEEP UP THE GRATE WORK O.K. OOH, OOH, CAN'T WAIT
TO FIND OUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT.

AWSOME!!! TOTALY LOVE THE NEW CHAPTERS BY THE WAY....I REALLY, REALLY HOPE THAT YOU\'LL BE ADDING
MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY REAL SOON...ANYHOO KEEP UP THE GRATE WORK O.K. :)

THAT WAS ONE AWSOME FIC, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEEEEEEEEASE!!!!ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY REALLY, REALLY SOON
O.K. ANYHOO KEEP UP THE GRATE WORK O.K. :)