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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. x3 Absolutely loved it.
There were a few spelling mistakes, or really words just mixed up, like \"brake\" instead of \"break\" and such, but it didn\'t distract me from the story at all. x3 -gives smex m00fins- Very well done, I hope you write more FMA. <3~
There were a few spelling mistakes, or really words just mixed up, like \"brake\" instead of \"break\" and such, but it didn\'t distract me from the story at all. x3 -gives smex m00fins- Very well done, I hope you write more FMA. <3~
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great, i hope you write more like this. keep going
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude!!! that was gooood. i wish there was more
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one word O___O HOTT!
i read this then had to go get something in my room, and bumped my foot hard on the door frame i was soo distracted after reading D : ur good...really good..
moremoremore!
i read this then had to go get something in my room, and bumped my foot hard on the door frame i was soo distracted after reading D : ur good...really good..
moremoremore!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It sure was heavy.. Are you gonna write more?
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O________O;; *dies of lack of oxygen, loss of blood, and a heartattack*
Damn! That was AWESOME! *purrs deeply* Is it wrong to have been turned on by this...? > >; If it is, I don\'t wanna be right!
Damn! That was AWESOME! *purrs deeply* Is it wrong to have been turned on by this...? > >; If it is, I don\'t wanna be right!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed it, the whole Ed wanting pain during smex....mmm yummy. XD But yet it was still sad....Poor Ed but at least he has Roy to give him what he needs and wants ya? ^^ Great story loved te ending. XD Heh Anyways you did a good job i hope you consider writing more like this one ^____^