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for Chains of Love

by Cepheus

person studio
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So I was feeling a little guilty about not reviewing anything of yours... but dammit, you update right before I get my bum back on here to reread and review! lol, you're not gonna beat me this time!!

ahh! Russian! Babochka is the name of my 'aunt'. She's one of my dad's friends from somewhere in the old soviet regions.

No! Russians don't drink coffee! They drink teaaaaa. Russian tea! It's made in a special little cylinder thing with steam and boiled water and stuff. lol, I'm such a detail freak.

Spencer and Max eh? That's interesting. Blondies!

I found a typo. It's in the little Boris bit after the dotted line, you've written 'twenty-four moths' instead of months. ;)

So who is Gavriil? Bryan's brother? I'm a little confused. Oooh. Alexandr, Czech! Aleksander in Russian and Alexandre in French. lol, Alexandre is my favourite of all the variations though.

I'm impatient for the next chapter now, because I want to know what's happening. like with Gavriil or Alexandr, and with Boris and his little drug inhanced whatevers.

Excellent chapter, and same for all of the other ones that I didn't review, I really love your creativity and the way you write. Keep up the good work!

<3 studio
person studio
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah. like way ignore that last comment. I totally missed the chapter before it without realising. no wonder I was confused.

I'm so silly!
person Blackrose
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I have to admit, I hate the pairing of Tyson and Daichi. I'd much rather it be Tyson/Spencer and Max/Daichi. Tyson's also my fave character, but I love you story and will definitely keep reading. But could you warn me in which chapters there will be a hint of Tyson/Daichi and warn me at any cruelty and nastiness towards him too please? Anyways love the story. Update soon.
person Virpi
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more, more! *claps her hands along with the words* Hey you already know what I\'m thinking, so why repeat it every time?

Tell me, though, what is Suzaku? *confused look* You used it somewhere on the text...

And yes, I think this is lighter, and I like it that way! Keep it going and update soon please! ^_^
person Virpi
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was so GOOD! Please update, and sooooon!
person studio
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm... very interesting. Very very well written too. *huggles you* In fact, it\'s awesome. I\'m now officially a fan of it.

And bless Bryan. Bryan Bryan Bryan. I\'m in such a Bryan phase. *wheeeeeeeeeeeee*

~studio
person Blackrose
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Poor Kai though. Hope he gets away from that scumbag. No doubt that that guy is only in it for a one nighter. hope Tala stops him. Looking forward to the next part. I love Tala/Kai ones. Hope Tyson and Max will be in it too. Not with each other though. With Spencer and Ian. Maybe Tyson with Spencer and Max with Ian. I love those pairings and they\'re very rarely seen. Anyways update soon.
person Virpi
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! O_O Update soon! It\'s really good!

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