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That was so sweet! ^^

Oh my Dear Lord...

...That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! *_______________________*

I love EdxAl absolutely to death, and this is one of the BEST EdxAl stories I have ever read!!!!! It was so wonderful descriptive and the words held so much meaning and heart behind it, as if Alphone poured his feelings and spirit into your words. The tender gentleness of the love was just...gah it made me squeal and my heart just seemed to melt. One of the the things I liked best about though? You had Ed be the dominant. Almost every EdxAl story I've found (which isn't much so far) has Al as the dominant one. I mean, I don't really mind so long as the story's good enough, and it's still brotherly love, but I'd like to see more DomEd stories, and yours just kicked ass!!! I hope you write another ;o; *hugs you*

~Sammy

oh GOD yeah. i wish you'd told me when you started posting your lj fics here!!ah,well,turnabout,right?

Beautiful.

Geez, ususally I dont like incest too much for some reason but ...yours is just...just great! Seriously that is very in deepth and its something that could happen, and although I\'m ususally not the type to beg...please, please, PLEASE!! add more to this because its just really good and ...well its defianantly up there with the best if you could add onto it and add some length it would defiantly be up there by \"A Ruby Surrounded by Saphire\" wich is my all time favorite. so ya just *beggs shamlessly* PALEASEEEE add more chapies my yaoi obsessed mind is waiting with baited breath for your answer and if you have works on any other sites besides this one I would love if you would tell me about them so that I may sample them myself. Until next time, seesya.

awww, that was too sweet. lovely work.