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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This review is for the first chapter as I yet haven't had the time to read the rest.
Probably the best PWP I read in years. Despite it being just a scene between Archer and Roy it held my interest right to the end. Your descriptions are very clear and the characters are solid and well defined. I'm glad there are more chapters to this since I too am intrigued to know more. Great story. Please, if you can, write more non-con Roy-on-the-bottom fics.
Probably the best PWP I read in years. Despite it being just a scene between Archer and Roy it held my interest right to the end. Your descriptions are very clear and the characters are solid and well defined. I'm glad there are more chapters to this since I too am intrigued to know more. Great story. Please, if you can, write more non-con Roy-on-the-bottom fics.
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*is stuned speachless*
...my...god...dude...you are SO going in my favorites.
Archers' such a bastard! *squeels*
...my...god...dude...you are SO going in my favorites.
Archers' such a bastard! *squeels*
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O
.. write more. now. pleeeeeeeeeease.
... also, kill Archer messily in the end. With great suffering. And.. pain. And.. other really nasty things. kthx.
.. write more. now. pleeeeeeeeeease.
... also, kill Archer messily in the end. With great suffering. And.. pain. And.. other really nasty things. kthx.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is by far, the best thing I have EVER read.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good....omg that was awesomely excellente!!!! ya think there should be a sequal? it could happen...maybe...i dunno..but that my friend was an awesome fic!!!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa......awesome story. i would never have thought that someone could get Roy that broken before. nice cliffhanger too. although it does make you wonder if archer is that much of a bastard. probably is. anyway, great story, i'll give it a 6 out of 5!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
auughh! *Is cryng* poor poor Roy. I..want to know and don\'t at the same time if Archer was lying. ;___; Well..Roy and ed have to get together and make the hurt go away! *still crying. lame like that XD;;* Such good writing T^T You are evil, and yet <3
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I believe my brain just had about a hundred orgasms in a row. I can\'t tell you what incredible genius this was. This was brutally raw, horribly sick, and yet strangely predictable considering your choice of characters. Both of them were in character. Archer has got to be the sickest character in the entire FMA world. I have never seen such a work. Whoever you are, consider yourself a genius, and my proverbial hat is certainly off to you.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, wow. That was pretty fantastic, if I do say so myself, even though dark and sadistic isn\'t really my thing, but... Good God. You\'re such a wonderful writer that I couldn\'t bring myself to stop reading (even though Roy makes me want to die a lot when he\'s sad). I\'ve decided to convice myself that Archer was lying about Ed, though, if only to keep myself from jumping out of a window or something.
So yeah, I heart you big time. <3 You\'re amazing.
So yeah, I heart you big time. <3 You\'re amazing.